alrkitty's manga / #Hunters(2)

A story about a person who awakens as a f class a his s class brother and how they survive the antics of higher beings and become the strongest together. Originally the main guy freaks about being a normal person when his brother is s class he's always been his protector and his provider but now he is unable to do that and his brother walks out of his life and acts ungrateful asks to stay out of trouble and stop going in dungeons so he goes to a scam to get awakened but awakens as f class and in one of those dungeons a s class monster shows up his brother saves his life at the extent of his own but our guy still dies but when he's dying he's given a wish stone and with that wish he gets another chance a chance to make everything right this time to truly protect his brother and maybe even the world but first he'll have to raise 50 s classes???

Well the side stories improve this story otherwise the ending would suck. I know they say it was supposed to be longer but based on the progression I'm gonna guess it'd be more of the same. The story has potential but when they meet when he is a hunter to alot of times they shrink the uke both in a appearance and penis wise. He was so buff and powerful before he met the seme again but once he's in the picture he got hella weaker. Diminished the story because of that. Also I'm lost why he kept saying no when they sleep together again it felt like it didn't match his personality. I also didn't like how they made the original hunters the bad guys I felt like that was wrong it also seemed wrong that he had to awaken. But how it went was interesting and he became pretty powerful afterwards....but we saw how cool he was originally and he went threw all that so I can't help but wish he could have shown how awesome he was without a system. Though if it had gone on maybe we'd get to see more of his coolness but unfortunately it seemed the seme wanted to turn it into some it just makes you able to handle me better thing. It just all becomes about sex and that unfortunate because there's tons of potential to have made this more. They show the semes care by the way but it feels conflicting with causing him to bleed almost strangling him and never trying to be sweeter. He did all that to get him and save him why wouldn't he cherish it when he got him? He does seem to in the beginning because it says he didn't sleep with him again but they don't choose to address that. Not a bad story but not my fav