Fujoshiarchive's manga / #Horrible plot(2)

First, I noticed the fucking hairstyle, then I kept reading trying to ignore it. But turns out the story is ass too, I could barely understand let alone enjoy it. The Seme falls in love from fucking once? What happened to his agenda on sex and dating. The uke's hairstyle irks me so much, and him forcing himself on the Seme. Then calling himself a Man whore for sleeping with everyone (Everyone labels him that way). Anyways I got bored. Look, I love stories on Dominant bottoms, but I would also want the top to say something. In this story, he did nothing but confess his day old feelings. Oh Did I mention they were drunk? I rate this a 1.5/5 maybe the artist should learn more about culture before using it in their shitty story plot.

Read 5-2020 Plot: Siyeon, a contract killer, has declared a boycott on men after being screwed over by his ex. That is, until he moves into a penthouse owned by Taekyung, a rich heir with killer looks. Contrary to first impressions, there’s more to Taekyung than his party animal persona, and there’s more to Siyeon than the cool, collected facade he puts on. The two can’t quite figure each other out…and yet are instinctively drawn to each other. This shit is so messy wtf. This shit was hard to read and the plot was all over the place I got to chapter 3 and wanted to quit. Starts off with the mc being fucked before his was introduced to the readers. I found it to be immature, and the MCs random job of killing people? Who just allows anyone to move into their penthouse simply because they are bored? That answers that. Taehyung finds out his new roommate is gay from a friend. He then tries to make a move on him out of no where. The friend comes over while he’s trying to get the MC drunk to fuck him. Then there was a random awkward part they inserted to be funny? Like the faces and script were horrible and awkward, like it was a forced funny part. Like in the midst of him asking the MC if he was gay. The MC tries to leave since they randomly start talking about work. The friend didn’t even seem like he wanted to leave while he has a lover at home. The MC says to taekyung after being outed as gay by the friend who says he saw him at a bar he then says “ I may be gay but I don’t just go to bed with just anyone”… the fucking next scene was him and taehyung fucking and him waking up with hickeys all over him. He literally contradicted everything he said the night before. When he woke up and pretended to be asleep then taekyung says it will be too far or some shit to get to his room. When that shit was literally two steps from his. Taekyung is disgusting for even getting him drunk to sleep with him. Housing , awkward script, and ordeals were unrealistic af and cringey. I have sooo many comments to say about almost every scene, I literally skipped some of their sex scenes and that says a lot about the character portrayal. I give a 2/5 and that’s being generous.