Mich's manga / #tsundere(5)

Aww haha I’m glad Shinba is being patient and waiting until izuhara is ready to have sex. Also I love how the jealousy is going back and forth and not only focusing on the seme (shinba) being jealous

Ok for the FIRST STORY The plot was there it just needed more developing. It kinda skipped some scenes like when they were gonna fuck for the first time. Youngwon said he’d take lead only cause it was haemin’s first time but somehow it skipped over and showed haemin in the middle of fucking him ??? Also they’d contradict themselves and their attitudes would change and the other would act like it’s nothing, as if they’ve been acting like that this whole time (except ofc when haemin said he accepted and would forget about youngwon near the end) like HUHHH. I lw felt like it was all over the place. But I mean I guess I at least got the gist of the storyline. I really did like the second story (aka side characters ig you could say) better. Both semes were possessive and lw toxic tbh. Like youngwon at first saying haemin had to like him more (but I think after he just gave in and figured it was ok) and he was toxic by knowing how haemin felt but not giving in and even pushing him a bit more (he had like an agenda) whew but we didn’t see much toxic or possessive. Since right when they got together the second couple came in :/. Dongha was pretty damn toxic and possessive too. Once he and sanho got together he HAD to know where he was at all times. He even said he’d call sanho every hour when he wouldn’t be at the cafe and he HAD to answer. Got really jealous of inwoo (so did sanho thoe so eh) called 45x and texted 35 (depends on how much time he gave for each call but damn) but I mean he was and is still pretty caring. Kinda worried about sonha’s ass thoe since he’d complain almost every time of it hurting. But all in all I really liked the art. Just wish the first part would’ve been written a bit better