Mich's manga / #flower shop(2)

Meh it was alright idk it felt like the story was too shallow. Tatsumi goes everyday to get white flowers but secretly it’s to meet Kai. All of a sudden shirou enters the pic and tells kao he must pay the debt of his guardians. Either hand over the flower shop or his body. Kai agrees to his body. The beginning was lw confusing as I was unsure as to what the time period was compared to other panels. Right when they’re getting along shirou pops up so it wasn’t like woah wth it’s more like ok... (too sudden so not really dramatic) also would’ve liked if we could at least doubt a bit who Kai would end up with but we could tell right from the start that it would be tatsumi. Such a shame I wish the drama would’ve been stretched. Cause in the end it made it a meh story. It wasn’t really developed just presented

Dialogue was a bit confusing at times. It also feels like some info would be missed and we had to magically know it? Unless what I saw was because of mistranslations