Mich's manga / #age gap(230)

Idk thought it’d be more serious but ig seemed more jokey like and I expected better. But it was a fast read so I don’t really mind it ig. Also I’m glad no one ended up being heart broken and even scarlet had her fill for the guys ig keke. A lot of info presented to us was just that. Presented but not delved deeper /:

Not too shabby but what gave the seme the grand idea to take advantage of him in the first place?!? Was he feeling horny after his phone sex sesh?? Or did he find him attractive since beforehand (like hearing him fucking turned him on) I thought we’d get an answer on that tbh but nope. The rest of it was alright. Uke was stressing over seme not recognizing him. I wanted to see the seme jealous ya know. He probably was but he was pretty damn good at hiding it (when he told uke (kaito) to tell his FWB where to finger his ass but that oh she wouldn’t be able to reach the second point. Aka where his dick reached. So that showed he was comparing). Also the fact that he offered himself right after the girl left was lw like he wanted take over and be the main. He even said to call him now instead of any other girls when he was horny. But damn he really left a vulnerable kid just cause of his bf. Could he not see he was being manipulated? So yea I felt kinda bad for kaito but in the end they made up so that’s good ig. But hopefully Ryo doesn’t become attached to anyone while he’s working as a school counselor.

Yikes. Idk this is like a 3.5 tbh. The character development was alright but Yamato never truly apologized for being rough with him after Shima said he didn’t wanna have sex after all. He only apologized in the end AND OVER TEXT for saying hurtful words to him.. which was outta pocket too. Yamato could’ve acted like he didn’t know shima but nope he went for him and even got Shima feeling all type of ways only to be pushed away and rejected (the kiss...) so when Shima kissed only his cheek back I was yess tease that bitch back. I wish the ex had tried to steal him away or someone else because the seme was acting like he really couldn’t care less in front of him. Like ok watch and see if you’re still fine after he tries to move on but ofc Shima didn’t try to move on and instead fought for him which ig is fine. But yea i didn’t like the seme aka Ryo as much. He said he only did physical relationship with his FWB but then got closer to Shima (the beginning when he found out that they went to the same school and invited him to the arcade after the fucking session). I wanna know if Ryo was actually fucking around with others after he kept their “fwb” going. Like dude really said he wanted to fuck Shima’s brains out after finding out he had a bf before. I’d be ok with it if he wasn’t fucking others at the same time. That possessiveness would be uncalled for.

Cute. Itsuki was adorableee and Jin was pretty hot whenever he protected itsuki (when he got stabbed. When he got mad at him for risking his life like nothing). He could be cute too thoe like in the festival. Practice for their first time and their actual first time. I wish we had seen the baby and when itsuki got marked (it was probably part of a ritual or maybe not since it has to be while they’re both in heat). Booo at Riri being turned down thoe /: wouldn’t have minded a 3p. I wanted to know when riri fell for him (it might have been when itsuki saved him from getting stabbed but he was already lw interested in him when he gave him some of his own socks). So yea some plot holes. We never learned what yr in hs Jin was in. And why the hell did they give Tenma another chance I thought Riri was gonna be pissed when he saw him in the end but nope. I wanted to see what jin thought of Riri liking and comfessing to itsuki. Hot when Jin protected itsuki from himself and hit his own hand to prevent the marking. Soo yea would’ve been 5 stars but needed more info and delve deeper into info. I thought itsuki was dirt poor with how he explained his sitch but his house looked nice enough. His family even went on vacation before. Why mention a sister if she never pops up?? So more like 3.7 stars .-. The tag for tsundere seme is only at first. Later he’s more like puppy seme.

Wasn’t too bad. I peeped okazaki getting jealous of hiyamas colleague at the end there. So yum. I’m glad hiyama was able to get over his past. I thought he was gonna commit suicide kinda would’ve if that old man remembered. Hiyama would’ve let him kill him. It’s kinda shitty that he gave Okazaki hope just to turn around around and give up everything thoe. Poor Okazaki having a crush on Mr. police officer ever since middle school and not finding him till he was in uni but at least they stayed together. Oh yeaaa and art seemed really similar and I was like damn this artist has almost the same style as this one other one... Kekeke didn’t realize they were the same person till now

Art was yummy I just wish we had seen Adam get jealous because they made Demi get jealous a whole bunch of times. Like bro I wanna see the seme get jealous at least once. It’s not nice to only make the big softy get jealous ): although he probably only a softy towards Adam heh considering everyone was scared of him (Adam mentioned they’d back off once the noticed Adam). Gah I hope we do get to see a kid. I mean we saw ONE panel of the potential kid but idk forsure if the author put it there. It’s literally just one pic but cuteee his horns look powerful then again Demi’s don’t but he is powerful. Bro Adam could’ve at least gotten jealous of how close Ajun/Ajin (idk how to spell his name but the bald dude. Aka sidekick aka subordinate) and Demi are but nooo Demi has to be the only one to get jealous huh. ALSOOO I wish there had been more scenes that were not sex related. So yea more details but it was still a nice read

3.5 stars... I mean it was good but it was rusheddd (the ending especially). I wish we had at least seen the uke (woojin) explaining to the brother (sangwook) what was up back then anddd also for him to tell his seme (sangyoon). So red haired (pilbum) was into the uke too? But then outta nowhere in the end he’s all blushy blushy with the bro.. see I wanted more development and not emotions abruptly changing to fit the plot line. Did secretary choi take seungyu to a psychiatrist... I doubt it since he’s a young master and they wouldn’t want that to go on his rep. We needed more explanation for Sangyoon’s ex who’s now in a WHEELCHAIR probably because of sangyu also in the flashbavk from sangyoon he had a cast (the ex) so either sangyu made him an invalid or broke his arm. Or both. Did sangyoon really not notice or did he just ignore sangyu’s actions.. see the surface of each topic was scratched and closed like nothing. So yea 3.5 stars. Art wasn’t too bad. Wouldn’t have minded the relationship to become poly especially after seeing the brothers in bed with the uke (woojin) in the middle :). But iggg

Okkk this. The art was good but there were just some details that were missing man. I would’ve loved to give it 4 stars but did the uke srsly have to keep repeating how he was scared of the seme till the very end. Like we see he lw warmed up to him but then he brings up how he still feels uncomfy and I’m just like ??? We needed more character development. At least for uke to say he’s scared for others when the seme is mad since the seme never did anything (after they got together) to harm him. And for him to suddenly accept to go out with him? Like I said more character development. And some plot holes like that secret fbi guy. Why’d he fall so hard for our uke? Uke painted it as a fling (lw) he brought up the relationship in passing like he was going to elaborate but never did… but I do love me some yakuza action or in this case mafia so yeah I give it 3.5 stars. Good art but needed (like I’ve said a bunch) character development and more to the plot

Missing character development and plot. We saw how they came to be but suddenly newfound uke fell for the seme even though he said he wouldn’t do sex friends because he wanted a serious relationship but suddenly it’s ok?? And we see from seme’s POV that he didn’t fall for uke at first sight so why go after him in the first place even after uke was saying nah I’m good I’m a top. Unless he wanted a challenge which I wouldn’t be surprised if he did. Like info was presented and then thrown away. What’s the point of bringing in a debt and loan sharks if they’re just going to disappear after the first two ch. like did uke pay the whole loan with his house or what. And the bro was presented but not shown as an obstacle so why make a big deal out of him?? So yea 3 stars. Art was good and story was alright. Could def use some improvement.

Ok ok yumm with the consent. Well mostly. Considering he missed him when uke was drunk. But Jesus to abstain for 800 yrs. that’s wilddd. Yea I read this a few days ago so I don’t 100% remember and I’m kinda lazy. I liked it but uke’s thoughts were everywhere bro. Seme was waiting for him basically the whole time. But once uke fell he fell HARD. Like dying for him hard. I just wasn’t really into the fact that seme wasn’t into the idea of dating guys but all of a shdden in the panel or ch he’s like fuck it I’m down. But it could be since he’s into the soul and not the actual body although this is the first time he fell so hard for him he even admitted to lw hating him in the other lives for making him go through reincarnation over and over again. But yea it was good just not great