Scratch Blue
Ahhh that ending was too sad. THE MC got happiness but he accidentally made someone aka Sora fall for him (side character/bully-> ex bully) sora realized that Mc has something going on with ML and the whole story ends with a close up him wiping his tears saying it’s too late (welp I mean he was his bully while acchan has been there for Mc since they were kids so I’m it’s better he ended with Acchan) plus acchan and Ryouta have better chemistry. Man idk why I thought ryouta would act more his age once he regained his memories. Like bro he didn’t have a chance to bro mich he was in coma so don’t expect too much. Keke but yea this was so good. I feel the only reason Acchan ended up being bottom was/is because he was basically plagued with regret and guilt for what happened to ryouta wait but even when smaller he lw turned into a baby when ryouta told him he could cry for his mom without worrying. And acchan mentioned he was now better cause of ryouta (basically like a crutch) so maybe he would’ve ended bottom either way. Anyway this was really good :)
Wolf Me Up
Had to go buy on renta. It was that good :) anyway this was pretty cute. I’m guessing Haru also started out as straight but once he saw/lw talked to Taishii he fell for him. It was a pretty cute story. Short guy goes to talk guy for advice. And they start dating after short guy aka Taishii realizes he has feeling for Haru too when a girl confesses to him (to Taishii) this could’ve gone on for way longer tbh ok not way longer but yes it could’ve been stretched without it seeming boring. Bet glasses friend always had his sus about Haru and Taishii dating. Lw thought there was gonna be more sex tbh (//∇//) but I’m fine with the amount we got because that just gave more room for the plot :). AHP REREAD ON 08-03-21 SHIT WAS STILL GOODD I REALLY LOVE HARU’S FACIAL EXPRESSIONS AND HIS FACE. STORY WAS GOOD BUT NOT AS GOOD AS I THOUGHT BEFORE. SHIT JUST HAPPENED FAST BUT LOVED THE JEALOUSY (BOTH ENDS). AND AND LW POSSESSIVENESS CX
Toshishita Kareshi ni Hirowaremashita
Idkkk some of the sentence structures were weird. The plot was good thoe and would’ve been nice if it had been longer. Uke aka shouta is 10 years older than Mayu mikuni (met when mayu was 17 (present)) 27 yr old shouta just got back from his friends wedding aka his long time crush. The shop had the same name as his crush (ig he was already drunk) so the shopkeepers nephew aka mayu took him to his room (nothing funny happened) after mayu realized how deeply shouta could love he looked up to him. In the end he was able to help shouta get closure from mikuni. Alsoooo -_- mikuni lw gave him a chance in hs but shouta was too scared and turned it down. So ya know he uh kinda did it himselfffffff ʅ(-_-)ʃ But ig its fine since he ended up meeting mayu.
Charming Scarface
Ok ok this was a good story. My heartttt. Shizuya confesses and uh lw rapes Yuma but Yuma tries to keep their relationship as was since he’s known shizuya since he was a baby and really adores him but now that cats out of the bag shizuya says he can’t stay like that and wants more. They end up together in the end and even come out to shizuya’s mom and she accepts because she believes she has no say in the matter (was alway working and never really took care of shizuya). Yuma at first didn’t love him in that way till shizuya confessed and did all those things (or at least he didn’t realize he did. So idk if that can still be considered grooming since he mostly thought of him as a younger bro of some sort) but yea we as the readers don’t know for sure the age gap between them maybe 10yrs (or maybe they did but idr) ugh I was lw curious about that one other couple (the one that fought shizuya and cut Yuma/scarred him) yes yes good art. Pretty good plot too
The Warmth Of Your Heartbeat
I ended up reading this on toomics because the disorganized chapters here were annoying me . Anywayyy this was pretty good. Would’ve been nice with more relationship development :/. Like ??? Wasn’t yeongwong developing feelings for doeul how could he go and say yes to Maru’s confession so easily >:. Also idk how to feel about Maru ending up a pop star considering it looked like he wasn’t really interested. Except for that one last time. But he called them annoying during the meeting and even ignored them. Did the author just add it in to distance maru about for the sake of the thruple working out. Also who tops when it comes to maru and yeongwong. Would it be maru since yeongwong is bottom with doeul. Man yea the more I think about it the more information I need. If anything in the end I would have thought yeongwong would have to pick and if he picked doeul maru would get with jungwoo(I thought that’s why jungwoo was presented in the story -_-) also would’ve been nice if doeul had a few more facial expressions he was always just like (^_^)(like somewhat serious face) but yea I guess it was good
Hiyo-chan Koi wo Suru?
Ahhh I wish this was longer it was so fucken gooddddd. Man I’m lw hitting jackpot today with these good stories (10-31-20) anywayyy I was reeled in because of how young the uke looked tbh (*´ω`*) they turned out to only be like 2 yrs apart. Uke aka Hiyo is a first yr while Komiya is a third yr. ig the author just wanted to depict how innocent the uke is thanks to how over overprotective his brother is (same yr as Komiya) although the one with the brother complex is Hiyo towards his brother (Yuu). The fake dating began because Yuu believed his brother needed to be more independent so he decided to fake date Komiya’s little brother Kouna. It lw backfired when Komiya told Hiyo they should fake date too to bring attention to them. Ofc they ended up falling in love. And whew lemme just say the smut scenes were goodddd. I wish they had been longer (there was only like 2). It was a bit weird that Kouna and Yuu ended up lw having a relationship too since we didn’t see much chemistry. Yuu just treated him like he’d treat Hiyo and Kouna liked it because of his lw bro complex (Komiya was known as the one with the bro complex but Kouna was lw about wanting his attention too) but like other than that I loved it. Really could’ve gone on longer tbhhh. The art was really nice too like ♪(๑ᴖ◡ᴖ๑)♪
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