Hetakuso Love Step
Not too shabby. Seme aka Aoi explained how he came to realize his feelings and Kotarou kinda does too. I like how in the beginning when he was only “interested” in kotarou’s reaction during the goukon he still went to save him when he himself was getting a blowjob and all the girl was doing atm to kotarou was giving signals. Lw wish she had done more like a kiss so Aoi would feel guilty or regret for even taking him in the first place but ig he got a bj at the end of it from kotarou. Waittt he did that shit after Aoi had another bj his dick!! Wish they could’ve explain more on Aoi going for girls after he accidentally outted himself in middle school. Kekeke loving the jealousy towards the childhood friend when kotarou only considers her as part of his family. Such a bad liar. Alsooo Aoi lw came onto him too strong considering he (K) didn’t want to. But ig all’s well that ends well
Goriyou wa keikakutekini
There was something missing idk. But I like how makoto told him the truth about those last two sex sessions not being meant to be used to pay his debt. Godai was like ???!! Cute. Also when he stuck up for him not knowing that the dude was actually his bro who wanted him out of harms way. Oof sex to pay debt huh especially when you yourself is in debt too. Not a good idea. Tsurou was really onto something when he told makoto he should just pay if he could. Which makoto did. Damn so his dad has luck with scratchers. I hope he keeps having it so they can live somewhere better
Ore no Aoharu wa Watasanai
Yea not too bad but idk I expected something different and more exhilarating but still nice how seme (I read this a few weeks back) (March but couldn’t updated since site went down. It ended up coming back after 2-4 days but I didn’t review and site ended up going down again for like a week or two) (so here I am now). Anyway it was cute how seme admitted to liking uke in middle school and actually scared away anyone else (O_O) (to keep him to himself) which made uke think he was being isolated as part as bullying. He didn’t really react badly when seme admitted that thoe... but yeshhh real good. Also how his friend realized he liked him to but didn’t even confess ): that was kinda sad. But the friend and him wouldn’t work out since the friend said ew to geeking out when reading manga which is basically uke’s whole personality. Seme was protective of uke and even caught him when he tumbled down a mountain (he tumbled too and held uke protectively as they rolled) I did want to see how the sis reacts to knowing who the uke was and that he was dating her bro.
Gaman Nante Oyoshinasai
Cuteee. Dude was lw currying to him thoe since he was into him since the beginning and wanted to fuck since they first met basically. Oof there were times where I almost thought uke would be seme since seme was talking about how his body still grew after graduating. I salute seme for waiting till after he graduated to fuck him since dude was so horny I thought he wouldn’t succeed with abstaining. 12 yr age difference mmm. I wanna know how much he paid him to over and cook for him. Kekek also wonder if he lw got jealous of how intimate his siblings are at first. (When uke said they get all kissy too and seme was basically like ...how old are they again) (he was like these mf better not be trying to get at my cutie. Once he heard kinder and 6th he was like awe. But bet if they were only a lil older he’d lw get jealous) anywayyy I wanted him to meet the mom. We never even saw her even though she was mentioned a bunch. Only her running figure was shown.
Naruse Akira to Ikkai Ya Retara Ore wa Mou Shinde mo Ii
Meh not too bad. Art again was good. Bullies should’ve had more repercussions. Ooo no lie Teru was cute and wouldn’t have minded him for hotaru. Ppl talking about how akira did wrong for being all rough with hotaru because it’s not his fault he was getting bullied but the problem was that hotaru didn’t confide in him and instead with teru. That was the issue... also hotaru isn’t too innocent considering he was gonna rape and did semi rape akira in the beginning sooo. Yeaaa akira needs to be more stand offish with all girls cause cmon those are WAY too many girls going after him. I wanna know how they treated akira after the rumor spread. We saw how hotaru was treated but not much of akira (except for that one time that teru was recalling). Heh loved that they included that teru got a boner from hotaru’s moaning.
Totsugimasen Kara!
Cute. Itsuki was adorableee and Jin was pretty hot whenever he protected itsuki (when he got stabbed. When he got mad at him for risking his life like nothing). He could be cute too thoe like in the festival. Practice for their first time and their actual first time. I wish we had seen the baby and when itsuki got marked (it was probably part of a ritual or maybe not since it has to be while they’re both in heat). Booo at Riri being turned down thoe /: wouldn’t have minded a 3p. I wanted to know when riri fell for him (it might have been when itsuki saved him from getting stabbed but he was already lw interested in him when he gave him some of his own socks). So yea some plot holes. We never learned what yr in hs Jin was in. And why the hell did they give Tenma another chance I thought Riri was gonna be pissed when he saw him in the end but nope. I wanted to see what jin thought of Riri liking and comfessing to itsuki. Hot when Jin protected itsuki from himself and hit his own hand to prevent the marking. Soo yea would’ve been 5 stars but needed more info and delve deeper into info. I thought itsuki was dirt poor with how he explained his sitch but his house looked nice enough. His family even went on vacation before. Why mention a sister if she never pops up?? So more like 3.7 stars .-. The tag for tsundere seme is only at first. Later he’s more like puppy seme.
Warrior's Afterlife
Art was yummy I just wish we had seen Adam get jealous because they made Demi get jealous a whole bunch of times. Like bro I wanna see the seme get jealous at least once. It’s not nice to only make the big softy get jealous ): although he probably only a softy towards Adam heh considering everyone was scared of him (Adam mentioned they’d back off once the noticed Adam). Gah I hope we do get to see a kid. I mean we saw ONE panel of the potential kid but idk forsure if the author put it there. It’s literally just one pic but cuteee his horns look powerful then again Demi’s don’t but he is powerful. Bro Adam could’ve at least gotten jealous of how close Ajun/Ajin (idk how to spell his name but the bald dude. Aka sidekick aka subordinate) and Demi are but nooo Demi has to be the only one to get jealous huh. ALSOOO I wish there had been more scenes that were not sex related. So yea more details but it was still a nice read
Kuro Neko wa Ookami Ouji-sama no Yume o Miru ka
Ehhh it was alright kinda leaning towards 3.5 stars. I’m not even sure there was a lot of character development. Dude just realized he still really liked him because his true self justified the way he acted towards others. We weren’t 100% the coyote dude was only acting like that for the sake of uke. It was probably only 40% for uke’s sake. Seme realizes he likes uke. Ends up calling him a bitch/whore without even hearing things out. Like all uke did was walk with another “wolf”. So he didn’t exactly catch them in a compromising situation. That shows us how jealous he’s gonna be... so yea that might be a lil too much when and if other dudes show up to try and swag uke’s feelings. Hopefully he’s less like that now that has confirmed uke’s feelings. Art was good. Just the plot that was missing something... like maybe show us after he after he gets with wolf. We get all that “drama” just for them to get together and it to suddenly end. Also dude kind pressured uke in having sex in the end o-o.
Koko made Yaru towa Kiitenai!
Meh ig it wasn’t too bad def felt short and a bit shallow. We could kinda tell maki was into him in th train scene when he got pissed but didn’t know forsure till later on. We didn’t really get explanations to maki’s past or Naru’s actually. They did end up together in the end thoe so that’s cool ig. He didn’t treat him too roughly before so that’s good (like he wasn’t that much of an asshole). Art was good too. I really liked the piercings.
Melt at Night