Fall for me (songha)
Ahh this was so cute. The aloof photographer realizing he actually liked the model when they model said “doesn’t that mean you like me”. fluffy shit right here. Hmm I wasn’t 100% who was seme/uke but apparently photographer was seme and model was uke
Shame♡Application
Kinda lazy to update but this was pretty good. The art was really nice too. I really liked the concept too. A lot of sex was in store for us readers. Hopefully I can give a bit more of a how I felt later. Rn I’m lazy tbh
Mitsu to Adabana
Meh it was alright idk it felt like the story was too shallow. Tatsumi goes everyday to get white flowers but secretly it’s to meet Kai. All of a sudden shirou enters the pic and tells kao he must pay the debt of his guardians. Either hand over the flower shop or his body. Kai agrees to his body. The beginning was lw confusing as I was unsure as to what the time period was compared to other panels. Right when they’re getting along shirou pops up so it wasn’t like woah wth it’s more like ok... (too sudden so not really dramatic) also would’ve liked if we could at least doubt a bit who Kai would end up with but we could tell right from the start that it would be tatsumi. Such a shame I wish the drama would’ve been stretched. Cause in the end it made it a meh story. It wasn’t really developed just presented
Business Like
Yea not too shabby. Beginning was good and kinda good character development but once he got back into modeling it kinda started going by fast. Like the bf broke up with him because he didn’t feel good enough?? That’s kinda sad... unless it was just an excuse. Also they quickly brushed through that like he didn’t just admit something major. And the mom giving in so easily after kiss was like ._. Too fast Ryota’s a good friend :). Also oof lw surprised no sex scenes since usually short ones have em. We also didn’t delve too deep into the seme getting left by women or just one. Also age gap? Or no?
Playmate (Rainy Wata)
Yikes. Idk this is like a 3.5 tbh. The character development was alright but Yamato never truly apologized for being rough with him after Shima said he didn’t wanna have sex after all. He only apologized in the end AND OVER TEXT for saying hurtful words to him.. which was outta pocket too. Yamato could’ve acted like he didn’t know shima but nope he went for him and even got Shima feeling all type of ways only to be pushed away and rejected (the kiss...) so when Shima kissed only his cheek back I was yess tease that bitch back. I wish the ex had tried to steal him away or someone else because the seme was acting like he really couldn’t care less in front of him. Like ok watch and see if you’re still fine after he tries to move on but ofc Shima didn’t try to move on and instead fought for him which ig is fine. But yea i didn’t like the seme aka Ryo as much. He said he only did physical relationship with his FWB but then got closer to Shima (the beginning when he found out that they went to the same school and invited him to the arcade after the fucking session). I wanna know if Ryo was actually fucking around with others after he kept their “fwb” going. Like dude really said he wanted to fuck Shima’s brains out after finding out he had a bf before. I’d be ok with it if he wasn’t fucking others at the same time. That possessiveness would be uncalled for.
Make It Only Love
Model x makeup artist. Wasn’t too bad but tiny pieces here and there were confusing. Laos wouldn’t have minded if ryou saw nao talking with Oto in the end. To see how well he hid his jealousy kekeke. I didn’t get whether or not Shion liked Ryou too or if he really only asked to be FWB just to help him relieve stress since I’m the end he said he picked you, oto. Or if he was trying to make him feel better by basically saying that ryou had no feelings for Shion either. Oto the model decides to quit when even after a while he gets nervous in front of cameras and isn’t doing so well. Shion (photographer, etc.) decides to present him to Ryou a makeup artist and asks him to model for him. From there admiration towards ryou turns into love. Ah but i was served with a daily dose of jealousy which yumm
Behind the Scenes(monologue)