Love Through Deception -An Omega Subdued by an Alpha-
It was getting so good but the ending was very abrupt View comments made by me in the comment section for more information
Choco Strawberry Vanilla
Fuckkk this was a really good thruple story and I’m kinda happy that they didn’t fall apart. It was honestly all thanks to the main uke because both of the seme developed way more feelings for him. Even though they were closer and knew each other for a longer time (the semes) (although they weren’t in that type of relationship, only shared everything together) (didn’t even kiss that much (the semes) (their first kiss was shared when they were fucking the uke and and the seme who initiated said in his head he didn’t wanna actually kiss him but the uke)
Immoral Sandwich
Yea honestly I wasn’t too into this one :/. I only liked it because it contained a threesome. But Tendou should’ve honestly stayed away from the pairing -.- like usually I don’t mind if 2 alphas pair with an omega BUT only if both of them are really into the omega. And tendou isn’t into Kazoumi >:| he’s going for kadota. Instead of being a coward he should’ve told Kadota about his feelings. At least then Kadota would keep him in mind or properly rejected him so Tendou could move on. But the thing he did was disappointing. Double pairing doesn’t always work so what Tendou’s is the one that ends up succeeding. What then? Kazoumi would’ve basically suffered. Wish Kadota had beaten up Tendou but I guess he didn’t because of the effects of the pair and they have history (childhood friends)
In the Cage
Holy possessiveness is all I gotta say
Kimi No Kao Ni Sasu Kage
I don’t even know what to rate this... miwa confesses to katou. Katou rejects and instead presents his other gay friend to him. At first hashina just wants to fuck but after miwa rejects him he slowly falls for him. Hashina blows him (miwa) after school and they end up doing that for a while. Later Katou admits to hashina that he actually liked(s) miwa too but was scared (didn’t realize it at the time) to agree. Hashina tells him to leave miwa alone because now they hang out at his house and do things. After, Katou tries to talk to miwa and miwa runs away (he thinks Katou is looking down(is disgusted) on him for doing those things). Miwa goes to Hashina and reveals he’s now ready for sex Again they do it in the library and Hashina texted Katou so he could watch. Katou then asks for him to leave him and miwa alone (in library right after the fucking) he rapes miwa and says it’s not him (like isn’t the same person he used to know (he himself Katou) they all get traumatized. Hashina for basically inciting it ends up getting erectile dysfunction after he went back and saw the mess Katou left with miwa. Miwa asks Hashina for sex. Rough sex. And Katou can’t believe what he did and loses his vision/hearing. A month passes, Katou still hasn’t came back to school. Miwa goes to him after Hashina basically tells him to. He ends up fucking him and Katou gets his senses back and they get together (?) not oficial to readers. So Hashina was left all alone. Man this is exactly why I don’t know how to rate it. Like wtfff. Wonder if Hashina got cured. Also would’ve been better for Miwa to get with Hashina as he became understanding and gentle towards him. Miwa was lw dumb for getting with Katou after what Katou did. Everything was just MISCOMMUNICATION. Yea idk I’m just done. This lw irritated me. And I’m usually down for fucked up stories.
Netorare Triangle
Not too shabby my bb Yukio needs some love too thoeeee. Cmon seigo accept him too ;) you already have physically anyway.
Nure Nezumi-tachi no Koi
Just realized I already read this on toomics 6mths ago... for sure before this month started (April) I knew it seemed familiar and I was even right when I guessed things that happened. Well apparently they’re taking it off of toomics on 5/11/21 so ig it’s fine if I put it here. Not too shabby. I expected the two broken hearted seme to get together but ryuu came in and I’m not mad. Ryuu was good to our seme yoshi so it’s fine. Feels bad for ryouji thoe. Would’ve been nice to see sakumi’s character development especially since he stayed with ryouji. Like is he messing with others still or is he now in a serious relationship with him.
Deep Love Virus
Not bad at all. Another one where their unrequited love loves them back but they end up rejecting them... like mannn. Some panels were a lil confusing but it wasn’t too bad. Kinda wish Shun showed more emotion tbh like yea he showed anger, happiness and whatnot but I wanna see jealousy. I saw jealousy but from haru. Shun gave up too easily now that I think about it. Also we should’ve gotten to see if shun liked mako before she started talking to him orrrr.
Oboreru Triangle