Souyuu Ganbou no Hanashi
Yuppp I really liked the end where this was all roleplay especially when dude came back in right away to make sure he was okay and was ready bandage him and everything. Yummerssss
Physical Talkroom
Not too shabby but what gave the seme the grand idea to take advantage of him in the first place?!? Was he feeling horny after his phone sex sesh?? Or did he find him attractive since beforehand (like hearing him fucking turned him on) I thought we’d get an answer on that tbh but nope. The rest of it was alright. Uke was stressing over seme not recognizing him. I wanted to see the seme jealous ya know. He probably was but he was pretty damn good at hiding it (when he told uke (kaito) to tell his FWB where to finger his ass but that oh she wouldn’t be able to reach the second point. Aka where his dick reached. So that showed he was comparing). Also the fact that he offered himself right after the girl left was lw like he wanted take over and be the main. He even said to call him now instead of any other girls when he was horny. But damn he really left a vulnerable kid just cause of his bf. Could he not see he was being manipulated? So yea I felt kinda bad for kaito but in the end they made up so that’s good ig. But hopefully Ryo doesn’t become attached to anyone while he’s working as a school counselor.
Playmate (Rainy Wata)
Yikes. Idk this is like a 3.5 tbh. The character development was alright but Yamato never truly apologized for being rough with him after Shima said he didn’t wanna have sex after all. He only apologized in the end AND OVER TEXT for saying hurtful words to him.. which was outta pocket too. Yamato could’ve acted like he didn’t know shima but nope he went for him and even got Shima feeling all type of ways only to be pushed away and rejected (the kiss...) so when Shima kissed only his cheek back I was yess tease that bitch back. I wish the ex had tried to steal him away or someone else because the seme was acting like he really couldn’t care less in front of him. Like ok watch and see if you’re still fine after he tries to move on but ofc Shima didn’t try to move on and instead fought for him which ig is fine. But yea i didn’t like the seme aka Ryo as much. He said he only did physical relationship with his FWB but then got closer to Shima (the beginning when he found out that they went to the same school and invited him to the arcade after the fucking session). I wanna know if Ryo was actually fucking around with others after he kept their “fwb” going. Like dude really said he wanted to fuck Shima’s brains out after finding out he had a bf before. I’d be ok with it if he wasn’t fucking others at the same time. That possessiveness would be uncalled for.
Pavlov's Lover
Not too shabby but didn’t like that the art wasn’t too consistent aka the bites disappearing here and there. Also wanted to see when Aki truly started having feeling for Eiji and didn’t just see him as someone fulfilling his desires. Also wanted to see how they were after getting in the relationship. Shioji (I forgot if I truly goes there or if shioni) really out here taking advantage of Eiji’s love for meat and not paying him /: and the fact that his bf is semi ok with it ?!? Excuse me but whaattt. Loved the fixation on bites and the focus on the mouth/teeth after Eiji was going in for the “kill”
Watashi no Shumi tte Hen Desu ka?
I thought it was gonna be yaoi at first tbh. Wasn’t too bad but the fact that they just blindly accepted the new girl and that they somehow always did it in the station at first without getting caught??? Well by more than one person… also long haired obv likes black hair more so they should’ve all talked about their dynamic in the relationship. Like are they a couple with an extra FWB or is she actually also part of the relationship and not just a friend. Won’t long haired get jealous if black hair starts to confide in short hair more
Kojirase Cherry
Meh you know how shallow one shots are. Not too bad not too good. Seme was pretty mean for leaving the uke like that and I can see why the uke was nervous when he met the seme again and they started that FWB relationship
Anti-Platonic