Mich's manga / #Beautiful Art(115)

Ehh not too bad uke came to slowly love seme. They could’ve had more lovey dovey scenes if it wasn’t for the slight misunderstanding where seme was holding himself back because he promised uke he wouldn’t tell him he loved him. 2 yr age gap

Meh not too bad but idk I felt like something was missing. Cute how seme always teased him and it turns out it was because he liked him all this time (5yrs). I wanna know if the other coworker lw had a thing for him too considering he always invited him out to places and was kinda touchy. Whew I feel like uke accepted that he liked seme too easily. Especially when he was so stuck on fumi before that so shouldn’t he be in denial just a but. Even more so because he considered that dude his enemy too. Idk uke was meh. So seme taught him how to work there and afterwards uke doesn’t like him ??? Like sir what is the reasonnn dude was helping you out and that’s how you returned the favor?? But imiggg. Also my homie seme really booked all of uke’s month schedule. Dude must be loaded loaded (from stocks etc. Especially when he doesn’t even have to pay for his home cause his gpa left it to him c: )

Meh ig it wasn’t too bad def felt short and a bit shallow. We could kinda tell maki was into him in th train scene when he got pissed but didn’t know forsure till later on. We didn’t really get explanations to maki’s past or Naru’s actually. They did end up together in the end thoe so that’s cool ig. He didn’t treat him too roughly before so that’s good (like he wasn’t that much of an asshole). Art was good too. I really liked the piercings.

Ahhhh this was goodddd. There were some things I didn’t like about the ML but I forgot what… a littl more possessiveness at the end wouldve been nice. What the heck was that ch where they came back to school and everyone. Literally EVERYONE whose come out came out and disturbed them. I didn’t mind the other delinquents since it kind of showed how much more protective the ML was now that she was his gf. Also wtf she should’ve yelled at the others for now trying to take advantage of her bf too (I say too cause they take advantage of her already). So also the 4 stars cause of those two things. Kinda wanted to see them grown up with children. The way ML told dude good luck instead of being possessive about him confessing to his GF LIKE SIR. like yea he can’t win her over when our ML was deadass pushing her away all this time. And now that he’s actually trying to keep her ofc she’s not gonna leave him but mannn at least show some hostility towards to the dude for even trying to. It was cute how before that he whispered in her ear saying. I love you.. maybe… like kekeke reminds me of the I like you scene ( he didn’t say it but basically didn’t when explained I’d liking meant blah blah blah (described the scenes between him and her))) shit was cuteee. I just would’ve liked for her to not be a pushover by the end but we see that slowly happening so that’s fine

Okkk this. The art was good but there were just some details that were missing man. I would’ve loved to give it 4 stars but did the uke srsly have to keep repeating how he was scared of the seme till the very end. Like we see he lw warmed up to him but then he brings up how he still feels uncomfy and I’m just like ??? We needed more character development. At least for uke to say he’s scared for others when the seme is mad since the seme never did anything (after they got together) to harm him. And for him to suddenly accept to go out with him? Like I said more character development. And some plot holes like that secret fbi guy. Why’d he fall so hard for our uke? Uke painted it as a fling (lw) he brought up the relationship in passing like he was going to elaborate but never did… but I do love me some yakuza action or in this case mafia so yeah I give it 3.5 stars. Good art but needed (like I’ve said a bunch) character development and more to the plot

Missing character development and plot. We saw how they came to be but suddenly newfound uke fell for the seme even though he said he wouldn’t do sex friends because he wanted a serious relationship but suddenly it’s ok?? And we see from seme’s POV that he didn’t fall for uke at first sight so why go after him in the first place even after uke was saying nah I’m good I’m a top. Unless he wanted a challenge which I wouldn’t be surprised if he did. Like info was presented and then thrown away. What’s the point of bringing in a debt and loan sharks if they’re just going to disappear after the first two ch. like did uke pay the whole loan with his house or what. And the bro was presented but not shown as an obstacle so why make a big deal out of him?? So yea 3 stars. Art was good and story was alright. Could def use some improvement.

ITHINK THERES SUPPOSED TO BE A SECOND VOLUME. Cute. The art was really cute. Especially when arochi would talk about the rockets and whatnot. I’m glad segusa’s mindset changed and he didn’t let go of arochi especially after getting to know him better. Glad they ended up going to the same uni too

Mannnn I wish it was longer. Like at least one extra ch cause we didn’t even get to see how they’d be after starting to date… would haruki get possessive. What about seiji. We’ve seen seiji become jealous but I wanna see haruki jealous too. Also was the grandma not haruki’s? They said she only had one grandchild but haruki has a sister so it can’t be him unless the rumor of one child is false. The art was pretty nice too

The word bubbles were kinda meh sometimes I couldn’t tell who was saying what. And idk if the translations were off but sometimes when they talked I was like ??? wth is going on. Also I wish there was more to see how yuya’s personality changed towards reiji :/ I hope he was nicer towards him (more honest) also rip that one friend that also liked Yuya. No lie Yuya was a lik annoying especially when he found out about where Reiji wanted to go for uni. My dude reiji gave up his dream to follow Yuya which kinda sucked and he was kinda pressured because Yuya said he wouldn’t be able to do long distance. So yea like I said please take care of reiji… and hit him less cause yikes

Yea wasnt too bad. Clyde sure did learn about stocks and internet pretty quickly. Some panels Clyde was yummm others he was a lil less because of how big his hair looked. Def wish we would have seen clydes POV when he first saw Yuu and what made him want to go up to Yuu to ask him to let him into his room. Also whew Yuu you really let a time traveling man into your house huh. I mean it was more than likely that it was because a gun was pointed at him XD. Idk how he was able to sleep with him residing in the living room though. I’m glad Clyde ended up wanting to stay with him and didn’t end up disappearing. Was he dissolving like that because he was slowly going back to his world? Or would he have just vanished into thin air because the universe was trying to take something that didn’t belong out? (Basically dying) also kekeke at the coworking finding out what Yuu really meant by “dog” yum at the bites btw. Could’ve been a 5 but something was missing. Also almost forgot but what the heck man. Clyde was leaving the apartment never to return? Was it because yuu said he was used living a normal quiet life and Clyde didn’t wanna bother him anymore…? Better have just been that