Mich's manga / #Bara(2)

Wooooweee this had all uke being muscular and tittied up. By that I mean the pecs were so big they looked like titties. I didn’t mind the strong muscular type being uke’s. 2/3 of the stories contained first time rape (like they raped the first time and then developed the hearty relationship...) the first one did NOT contain rape and it was actually pretty cute since uke was puppy dog around the seme. UKE= Tatsuo SEME= Satoshi But mostly while alone. :/ we didn’t get to see much of them outside once they developed relationship but mostly because it was only 2 ch but all in all I think it was balanced with the amount of sex shown. 2nd one

Missing character development and plot. We saw how they came to be but suddenly newfound uke fell for the seme even though he said he wouldn’t do sex friends because he wanted a serious relationship but suddenly it’s ok?? And we see from seme’s POV that he didn’t fall for uke at first sight so why go after him in the first place even after uke was saying nah I’m good I’m a top. Unless he wanted a challenge which I wouldn’t be surprised if he did. Like info was presented and then thrown away. What’s the point of bringing in a debt and loan sharks if they’re just going to disappear after the first two ch. like did uke pay the whole loan with his house or what. And the bro was presented but not shown as an obstacle so why make a big deal out of him?? So yea 3 stars. Art was good and story was alright. Could def use some improvement.