This one is cute. It’s obviously short, but it had a much drama as it should have it. I wish they would make it longer so that way he can really rub it in the ex face. I hope the expandable on his story I doubt it though. I also don’t like how quickly it was moving but what can you do with a story that has four chapters. The sex scenes was really hot and that a lot because it’s basically and every chapter. I would love to explore more of the bottom job. Other than those things it’s not bad wish it was a little longer and better. 3.5/5
Lion Heart