Harley's manga / #Smut(133)

BRO CUT HIS HAIR IN THE END?? ENOUGH. Sanho was a HORNY ASS BASTARD WAS SO OBSESSED WITH THE GAME CHARACTER LMAO. PUTTING A DILDO ON HIS BODY PILLOW AND RIDING IT IS SOME INSANE WORK. I did feel bad about Sa Baek Hwa at times, because he was so clueless and Sanho was taking advantage of him. They did end up falling for each other which is nice, maybe would have been smoother and more satisfying if the story was longer, but it's fine. Sanho was insane for what he did, but I'm trying to understand him a bit. Apart from being IMMENSELY HORNY, bro was also just lonely. And he did find his perfect man in Sa Baek Hwa (love writing his name btw) so it makes sense for bro to be reluctant to let go. The plot twist at the end - when we find out it was actually Sa Baek Hwa who removed himself from the game in the first place - was insaneee. Jaw dropped. Very cool. And I like that at the end he was also the one who wanted to stay with Sanho. Very cringe at times, also very embarrassing from an outside perspective, like Jungho's for example, because yeah Sanho just looks so insanely obsessed with a video game character like if this happened irl I'd argue to put him in a psych ward. Anyway it wasn't that bad. Comedic at times. I do think it's not a bad idea and so could have been executed a bit better.

This shit was good. Honestly I had a lot of fun reading it. But I just can't give it more than 3 stars. 1. The protag was UGLY AS FUCK HOLY SHIT. Not even cause he's feminine looking, bro was just UGLY. Thankfully his eyes SHRANK by the end of the story. I couldn't look at them. 2. This doesn't take away points but I needed to mention it: the names are horrendous. I can pronounce Korean names easier than THESE. I can't even type them out. Where does this take place? What is the origin of the names? Are they of German origin? British? Scandinavian? Idk. They are a first for me for sure. 3. Honestly loved the side couple more than the main couple. Emillette was so dense holy shitttt. I felt so bad for Etzel. He was sweet. The kiss was crazy and Emellette wasn't even around so it was unnecessary but whatever. 4. The story was good, it had big prospects, but man, fuck, it was stupid. I understood nothing from the world-building honestly. We never found out why the princess and the captain were going at each other, never really had an end to the royal dispute and, yk, MURDER ATTEMPTS AND WHATNOT... 4. We never found out their age difference. I've surmised Sir Waton is less than 13 years younger than the captain. Not sure exactly how big the age gap is though. And it's only mentioned once. 5. The sexual assault was NOT NEEDED. And fuck bro I always hate when they go straight to sex after they've just been sexually assaulted, like- TIME AND PLACE?? 5. At least sir Waton wasn't that big of a damsel in distress. I did like that he protected the princess and later down the line even became champion of a fighting competition. 6. During the attempted murder of the princess, sir Waton somehow sustained a head injury. My question is: HOW?? WHY IS THERE ONE SINGULAR HEAD WOUND AND NOT A SINGLE SLASH OR CUT, GIVEN THAT THEY WERE FIGHTING WITH FUCKING SWORDS?? AND THEN BRO DIDN'T WAKE UP FOR DAYS/WEEKS LIKE YOU FUCKASS BITCH YOURE EXAGGERATING ITS NOT THAT SERIOUS GET YOUR TWINK ASS UP. 7. The captain's character was very inconsistent. He's shown to hate nobles, and yet very easily fumbled when sir Waton told him he wanted to stay by his side the first day they met. Then we learn he thinks everyone that's close to him DIES so NOW he wants to stay away?? THAT WAS BROUGHT UP OUT OF NOWHERE. His character isn't expanded upon enough and not given much thought, so all his actions feel very weird and unnatural. 7. I love that he kept the nephew. Was it that improbable that bro just took from his mother's side? He looks like his mother. Why is it that their first thought is "OH THE WOMAN CHEATED" MOTHERFUCKER LEARN BIOLOGY FIRST. YOU DESERVED YOUR DEATH. 8. "He's been quiet since birth" BECAUSE BRO HAS BEEN TRAUMATIZED SINCE BIRTH DID WE FORGET BRO IS AN ORPHAN? Bro even went to a boarding school cause he felt unloved living with you - HIS UNCLE. BRO HAS TRAUMA. Poor kid lmao. 9. His asking for the father's signature was funny. *holy shit how did I mess up the counting so bad??? I'm not fixing it.

THIS SHIT WAS GOOODODODOD FUCKKKK. I HAD SO MUCH FUN READING. DO JIYOON WAS A CUTIE PATOOTIE. It was kinda insane. Very low-key toxic. Do Jiyoon was a mad fucker frfr. It's good that Jaeha wasn't manipulated tho, he saw through him and still liked the trash lel. I was between giving 4 and 5 stars just because of the abrupt ending. I NEEDED MOREEEE. WHERE IS THE IMPRINTING?? I WAS PROMISED IMPRINTING. FUCK KIM KANGMIN ALL MY HOMIES HATE THAT BITCH. Also is the guiding chief confirmed dead??? Idk. Hopefully. Very good characters, very good story development. Just the end needed tweeking.