Harley's manga / #Smut(126)

Now this was crazy. The art pulled me in, which truly was beautiful, but I can't lie, at times, Bau looked fucking insane. Bro kept bulging his eyes and omg he looked psycho. Was he trying to look seductive or something? Cause he failed. Miserably. It was an insane manga. Idk leave me alone. I'm confused. The deer haunts me. ️brilliance️ Gao Ying is an uncanny valley baby, even more uncanny WHEN SHE TURNED INTO A DEER. Idk man idk. This was a ride. I hated the dancing. ️brilliance️

BRO FELT PLEASURE WHILE GIVING BIRTH??? Stockholm Syndrome at its finest

I really liked the trope, and the world in which it takes place is very interesting. The political and societal aspects of it are also interesting. What happened to Sangyul was quite tragic, and the artist revealed they actually didn't even show a lot of the more brutal details of his abuse. I do have objections however. For starters, Sangyul was quite UGLY, ok? The artist showed a side by side of him from each season and he looked his best in season 2. Idk what the fuck happened to him in season 3. Reok looked handsome in each season. Moreover, it felt like the characters' personalities were very flat and expected, yk? Very stereotypical, not much of an actual personality. Idk I didn't like them that much. Next, the flow was quite fast. Very very fast pace, which yeah ruined it a bit for me. Cute and/or deep moments didn't feel satisfying as a result. Lastly, I feel like there are some plot holes, ex. What happened to Sangyul's older brother? Not Hanseok, the other guy, who Reok wanted to use in order to overthrow Han. I get there was a change of plans, but that change was so sudden and bro just got forgotten and never brought back up again??? The relationship was cute, consensual. Love that they acted as symbols of change. The wedding was beautiful. I think it's implied at the end that Sangyul is pregnant? Tho it was said he couldn't get pregnant cause he didn't have a womb... idk I'm confused. And there's no side chapters either. If he is, I'd love to read sides too about it.

This shit was so embarrassing oh my fucking god KILL ME. Why were his pubes shaved???? Biggest unsolved mystery of the century.

It was... not good Dobin moved on WAYYYY too quickly from his ex, while the bottom (already forgot his name omg) fell in love WAYYY TOO QUICKLY (the top too actually). The professor was WAYY BETTER THAN DOBIN. HE SHOULD HAVE BEEN PICKED. They were ugly, the smut was horrible and made me so uncomfortable (borderline rape). The pace made it worse. They were both stupid. Idk. I didn't like it.

This was really good ^^. I LOVE GUIDEVERSE. YOU SEE? EVEN THO IT HAD SKIPS, IT SHOWED ENOUGH TO BE UNDERSTANDABLE AND SATISFYING. For 8 chapters I think it was done well. Not much you could have done more with such a plot ig. Dragging it on could have easily become annoying I think.