ajay's manga / #Possessive lover(71)

Aight den

This plot had so much potential, so why’d you have to make it a speed run in Mario? It was so fast paced, that none of it seemed natural or real, so wtf just happened. Sir, get the pacing and paneling right BEFORE trying to even publish a story. I mean, did the editor not even look at this disaster?

Um excuse me, but no ️ This was quite awful. There was so much rape, and blackmail. Wtf is wrong with this story? I’m sorry, the seme is just a fucking bitch. I really hate his guts, and I think we need to get a rescue and retrieve team out there for the uke. Also, why tf did I read this knowing I was going to hate it? XDDD Eh, whatever. Like what you like. Just don’t involve me

This was so cute!! The relationship seemed so natural and healthy, especially since they are childhood friends. I love the sweets theme that was consistent throughout the story, it was a really nice touch. The whole time I was reading it, I was going “oooooo” and “wow” in my head because of the art. It was amazing! Go read this great manga.

Ok sir, whatever you say

Is it wholesome? Yeah. Is the uke cute? Yeah. Is the seme hot? Yeah. Is the “I love you” scene the best thing ever? Yeah. Is the story well written and entertaining? Yeah. Should you read it? Yeah.

Yo. Get me the chapters. *points glock*

This was fine. It was quite average on the yaoi scale, but at least I was entertained. I very much enjoyed the seme’s face, it was quite lovely