Tbh this was a bit confusing to read bc I was not expecting two stories (I should have read the tags). Overall it was pretty interesting but the pacing of the first story was off and with how short the second one was I don't think I really got to appreciate it as much as I could have. Both were really cool concepts but the execution wasn't that good. I enjoyed the second story though, it was sweet and interesting.
Amaeru Kubiwa