Mostly good story. Characters behave authentically. They feel like they would react this way in real life. I take issue with the possessiveness that many characters have in romance stories. Like the side characters are able to point out how… creepy it is, but it’s not acknowledged by the story itself. Not wanting Jun to have any make friends is seen as romantic by the story. I feel like confessing his possessive thoughts was not enough, he needed to actually be shown not letting those thoughts get to him. Also, if we spent so much time with Dongha, I think he should have his own personal arc. I felt bad for him by the end. His actions was just used to further the main characters plot, but I think he deserved an ending. Perhaps he would become more mature and actually be a friend to the main characters, which would show how Yoonseul can control his jealousy.
All in all, good story.
The Third Ending