The concept is cool and interesting but the way the characters act and the way the plot flows is just hella weird. I would not be surprised if a 13 yr old was the one who wrote this cuz the story progression and arguments that happen are really immature and unhealthy D:. I was really disappointed with how the story unraveled because I loved the characters and thier designs. Tbh I didn't even finish it cuz the conflicts that would arise were to unrealistic and never gave them room for real character development :/. I'm just going to imagine that they lived happily ever after married ^_^ <3
Raising a Bat