loved the art but the story is off. I guess if you like stories with little to no substance then its good. I felt like they could have explained a few things or even expanded on a few ideas. Like they somehow went from no genuine feelings towards each other to wanting to have sex? I get that a lot of people don't like long stories but this just felt confusing. I don't think there was much of a plot and it was EXTREMELY to the point. Idk I think I just like it when I have the opportunity to get to know the characters more... that and development. There was no development, more like oh you're a war torn soldier to lets fk! and oh you brought a kid? Ig we weren't in a relationship 2 chapters ago but now I feel cheated. like what? also the intense time skips + just jumps without notice felt weird and choppy.
The Boomerang Duke