『Fangtasia』's manga / #Work life(2)

Okay I don't know if it's the original writing or if it's the translator's fault, but the writing of this manga just seemed super clunky to me. It's like how they say "show, don't tell" except it was ALL TELL. Like I dunno. It's the type of writing you'd see if the author wants to establish a setting. For example: It's like a guy goin "Hey there Matt! I haven't seen you since the apocalypse started 5 years ago, wiping out most of the human population and leaving its survivors to rebuild. Are you still with your beautiful wife Claire who was your childhood love? Seriously. This is how it felt reading this manga for me. Too much telling, not enough showing. The character's WHOOSH through all their motivations and feelings in one page of dialogue and it feels unnatural. It made it even weirder in the sex scenes cuz it just feels like people sitting there discussing their preferences over tea. "I see you like it when I touch you over here." "Yes, it turns me on." "Yes, I can tell from your voice. Hearing you turned on, turns me on. Very nice" "Quite." Let us all just quietly admire this beautiful line: "My dick? My dick is like deerskin. It's durable and warm... And mature." (▰˘◡˘▰) (don't mind tears in my eyes, I'm just getting a little bit emotional over here)

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