『Fangtasia』's manga / #Fetish(12)

Okay I don't know if it's the original writing or if it's the translator's fault, but the writing of this manga just seemed super clunky to me. It's like how they say "show, don't tell" except it was ALL TELL. Like I dunno. It's the type of writing you'd see if the author wants to establish a setting. For example: It's like a guy goin "Hey there Matt! I haven't seen you since the apocalypse started 5 years ago, wiping out most of the human population and leaving its survivors to rebuild. Are you still with your beautiful wife Claire who was your childhood love? Seriously. This is how it felt reading this manga for me. Too much telling, not enough showing. The character's WHOOSH through all their motivations and feelings in one page of dialogue and it feels unnatural. It made it even weirder in the sex scenes cuz it just feels like people sitting there discussing their preferences over tea. "I see you like it when I touch you over here." "Yes, it turns me on." "Yes, I can tell from your voice. Hearing you turned on, turns me on. Very nice" "Quite." Let us all just quietly admire this beautiful line: "My dick? My dick is like deerskin. It's durable and warm... And mature." (▰˘◡˘▰) (don't mind tears in my eyes, I'm just getting a little bit emotional over here)

https://www.mangaupdates.com/series/96iu8wr/junbaku-sweater https://www.ebookrenta.com/renta/sc/frm/item/139401/ https://batotoo.com/series/144509 Ichimai Goshi Fetish (Alternate Story) Status in Country of Origin: 1 Volume (Complete) Kyoichi is a fashion major at the Mishima Design Academy. He divides his smooth-sailing school days between class and the cosplay club, hanging out with a different girl every day. ...Or, well, he used to. Ever since he saw his friend Umi decked out in a suit fit for a prince, Kyoichi's been feeling awkward around him. He keeps touching himself while thinking of being tied up by Umi. Girls are getting pissed off that he can't perform for them anymore - his life's being turned upside-down! Then, when he's at a photo exhibition headhunting a photographer for a club project, Kyoichi gets headhunted by the photographer to model for him... tied up and nude! Little does Kyoichi know that by accepting the job, he'll come face to face with desires he never even knew he had...! This is a brand new instalment of romantic adventures at our favorite cosplay club! Also includes an extra chapter of the hit manga "Bodysuit Fetish"!

https://www.mangaupdates.com/series/d5cmhfq/dame-bl

Chapter 5 of Senyaichiya Happy Ever After.

The first half of this didn't really pull me in but its one of my rules to read everything till the end and I'm glad I did. I gets way better at the second half with a natural flow of feelings and situations. Not perfect, but a good read. I liked how the seme's admiration was what saved the day with that guy that blackmailed his sweet uke, and how that admiration turnt into love. Our uke also learnt to love himself and respect himself more through his seme's eyes and feelings.