Picky Reader's manga / #dropped(4)

Ch.1

Uh, the story is messy in many parts. Especially the narration and scenes, a lot of them jumps everywhere, out of the context / different topic from what's in the panel before, so I kinda don't get what is the author trying to say? A messy stortelling, really. And it's not because of style: it's a lack of storytelling ability. Plus I'm not into narcissistic/sadistic-ish seme nor toxic-ish relationship so, no. Thank you. Dropped. Ch.7.

I can't stand the art style, so old and ugly and the relationship isn't healthy. Not to mention their personalities are both bad. Hhhh.

dropped