Phantasm's manga / #Massive plot holes(32)

Art is really meh, characters don't even have visible noses sometimes Plot feels dull, side characters only serve as filler, lead characters are super 2D MC is super OP from the start, no growth or anything, v boring, 3.5/10 slightly worse than your Chinese Shounen manhua

It's so bad that it's funny, genuinely trash plot. Honestly enjoy watching the MC spend money, but instead if MC spending for the quest, it's just using money as a method to further the plot without any actual developments. Quite a pity since it could have been a unique genre

MC is somewhat a scumbag and not in the smart, manipulative way. Less than 13 chapters in and he's already got 2 women who somehow fell in love with him almost instantly. The setting was interesting, but the execution is pretty bad. 4/10

Overly cheesy and characters are very 2 Dimensional. Author tries to show the characters having "development" but it's expressed badly.

I can't make it past the 10th chapter, the plot is genuinely so terrible. The main plot points are badly explained and the backstory is messy. The author clearly wanted to depict a cool, badass MC but honestly it feels somewhat childish and trying too hard. No clue how this has a 9.0+ rating 5.5/10

The pacing is horrendous and the plot armour is thicker than Mrs Incredible Feels like the author wanted to add all the plot points of a typical shounen apocalypse manhwa but rushed it. Dies and reverses time? Check. Hidden class? Check. Face slapping mob that looked down on MC? Check. Defeat a "difficult boss"? Check. Girl is impressed by his power and follows him? Check. And it's all within less than 12 chapters.

One of the rarer times where the male character (Possible ML) is the annoying bastard I was quite excited for the innkeeper concept but this was a disappointing read. Every character feels incredibly superficial and 2D. It feels like the author didn't even bother to develop the worldline properly and is just coming up with new plot points as they go.

Author can't balance the childishness and the grown up part of MC properly. There are just chapters where MC acts like a fully grown adult and some where he just acts like a little kid. The constant jumping between the two is very abrupt and doesn't work well. The first few chapters were good but after chapter 12 onwards, it just started going downhill. Personal opinion, 3.5/10

How is this rated above 9? MC is the typical "oh I don't know that my family loves me" but multiplied by 10. Plus the family suddenly loves her for no reason, just because they saw her? I bet the author is going to do some shit like "The entire family regressed but they don't have their memories" HAHAH

Plot is pretty bad, MC reincarnated/transmigrated into a new body but is immediately strong, doesn't need any development whatsoever. The first 3 chapters are literally him just going "oh everyone's so weak" like huh??? How's that a "new, weak body" Also the amount of ladies popping up in less than 10 chapters is just insane. Art is mediocre, many characters' faces have 0 expression, just the same blank stare all the time. 3/10