Starfirefairy's manga / #Really dumb storyline(18)

The blonde guy is such a pain in the ass, He is a classic Mary sue, not worth the time.

I Hate the FL, she said "she's a victim too" but she benefits from the ML being brainwashed. I may have not been her choice, but she wants him to continue being brainwashed. Its disgusting! And to top it all off, she is a stupid character, she does nothing fo the dukes estate, she does nothing to help him in his everyday life. Fuck her

Boring, all of this could be solved through good communication. Trying to make a story around miscommunication is dry, drawn out and boring.

I don't like this. This Mc dose nothing to better herself. She doesn't use her 21st century knowledge to do anything. She's a Mary Sue, who is coated in plot armor and she's really stupid. She thinks onething and does the exact opposite. 0/10 I would not read.