ReviewRaptor's manga / #wtf just happened?(290)

My comment got deleted but I'll say it again: The writing is amateur-like and just makes this unenjoyable to read. There is WAY too many things skipped and nothing is explained or even just visually hinted, not even a single word of 'hey this is the past' or 'XYZ years later, after I got reincarnated'. This is probably the worst story in terms of writing I have come across to be honest. And the only excuse is laziness, because it feels like the author just wanted to 'get on' to the good part and hence skipped literally ALL important information, plus discarded the importance of even just mentioning these things. I'm dropping this like a blazing potato. (Let's see if this comment also gets deleted. Probably by a staff member that's a die-hard fan or maybe involved with the author otherwise i can imagine. - So much for free speech on this website, huh? Slowly turning into Twitter and the like I see.)

EDIT: Also seems to be falsely tagged with smut. So far, except for touching and kissing, there was NO sex scenes shown. Meaning; it's NOT smut. Maybe there is an uncensored version? But as it is right now, these uploads border shounen-ai more than they do yaoi smut. Minus the usual innocent aspect shounen-ai generally has. But still. What a letdown... Chapter 20 : Did you guys seriously cut out major chunks of it and then upload it? You might as well just NOT upload anything then. If I want to have a rough draft of keyparts of a chapter, I can ask someone to describe it to me. Don't bother uploading this kinda chapter, butchered to a degree it hardly makes sense and feels more like a flashback from a One Pice episode of the previous arc so the watcher is up to date...just don't. =_=

I remember this. Pretty sure I added it to my list because the adult artworks are nice but with this kinda plot...really not something I'll read.

I really hoped (and expected) something better. The writing feels more like a rough draft with some parts partially fleshed out. It's way too rushed and hurries along without taking time to explain a situation in detail or let emotions or the mood of the situation be delivered to the reader. It moves from one happening to another without letting you take in what is happening and it has no focus on the emotions of the characters in general. Which is detrimental for stories like these. The characters are bland, the artwork os okay but not amazing enough to keep me interested just for the artwork alone. So, sadly, I'll pass on this one. I don't feel like any of these issues will be fixed. It's not uploaded as a promo, but the first two chapters instead so there's little to no hope these things will change. All in all this feels like a story written by a teenager that isn't aware of how this type of setting would work (hence the major logic issues aside from the pacing problems). I suppose it might be a decent first work for the author, but nothing I'll bother reading or recommending. Enjyo to whoever doesn't care about these issues, I'll look around for other stuff.

"Die Idee war gut, aber Lili's Arme waren zu kurz..." Good idea, shitty execution...goddamn it. ;-;