ReviewRaptor's manga / #perfect(42)

I will say it as it is; I'm disappointed. Disappointed that this is not WAY longer!!!! This could have gone on for SO much longer (there was endless potential, very well done, Author~), like 50 chapters long of 'solving the problem' of Mister Hare, for example. I really REALLY thought and wished this would be at least twice as long. Dammit. X'D I hope the side stories won't be shorts without any real connection other than small slice of life moments. But I'm pretty sure that's what they'll be, given the ending was written as it is. ;-; Fingers crossed the author will hear my pleas and continue this someday. I really think there was lots of options for storytelling. Especially now that we know they work together and Mister Hare is such an official figure. Either way, this was amazing and absolutely adorable. The art is impressive, especially those miserable moments of our pretty Black-footed Cat boy. The author has amazing skills to create those chibi expressions. Love it. X'D Needless to say: VERY recommended, despite it being so short.

I think this might be the perfect stalker story, yes?? As A1rkyn mentioned somewhere below. It's odd that the author managed to portray this all so sweetly, in such an interesting way and making it really fluffy despite the stalker topic definitely being anything but. XD Such a great story, especially since it's not starting with non-con but instead the MC enjoys it all. This is probably gonna be my favourite comic for years to come, if it keeps being so perfect. <3

(THIS IS A REVIEW, so spoiler-ish things are mentioned.) This was almost entirely perfect. The character personalities, their rhyme and reason and the way they overcame their problems was very well done. Tho I wish they would have put more into the love interest's trauma with the scumbag brother, that came a little too short for my taste considering his shocked reaction was quite heavy but the mending of his wounds was done within a flash. That could have been done a tiny bit better tbh. Same with the therapy aspect of things. I think it would have been better to include a silent panel here and there to show he infact kept going to therapy. That would have been a really important but tiny detail for this story that gave it more realism. The approach at each others mental problems was very well done tho. There was realistic reason to it all and results of the trauma being recieved. We get too many authors cranking it to 11 just to make it more dramatic, but that is NOT needed if you know what real trama can be like. Big big praise on that front! The ending was absolutely sweet tho. The MC seeing the flashing of faces of people he can indeed trust because he knows them to be kind was such a lovely detail, I loved that. <3 I know some people might not like the no-bonking aspect, but I find this story is too much on the sweet side for it anyway, so it doesn't really need it in my eyes. It's an emotional driven story to begin with, so the horny doesn't need to be satisfied. One might say. X'D The art is lovely, the story grand and realistic and the few flaws I can find are minor enough to still let me say this is worthy of the Perfect tag for me. I would VERY much recommend this to anyone that likes a realistic story, based on realistic trauma and behavior and something that is more focused on telling a story than the romance. Younger, less experienced readers might find this boring but I'm not really gonna go there and state why this is content they SHOULD read to develope their standards. XD To each their own. 10 outta 10, will read again~

I really adore how realistic this was held, no unneded drama or dramatic behavior and so much wholesomeness and sweetness and cuteness. It's just so adorable! <3 This author does a good job bringing across moods and emotions I gotta say. And the expressions are very well done too. I'll have to read more of this author's works, hopefully they'll be just as grand. :) I think this would be a great first read for people switching from shounen-ai works to yaoi. The romance and communication is the focus and sexual content is just the cherry ontop of the happy ending chapters. The sexual scenes are short but not too short and they skip just the right amount of things every now and then when it does finally happen. The only unpleasant thing in this was the ex-girlfriend of the MC. Who was a collossal cunt. I loathe people who think only girls are allowed to be shy, inexperienced and awkward about relationship things. MC would have wasted his precious innocence on that rat. Good thing he didn't. Kindly go fuck thyself~. (づ￣ ³￣)づ

DETAILED REVIEW WITH BASIC SPOILERS. Okay, so first off: Do not go into this for anything but smut or comedy, this is not a story to take seriously and critique the character's behavior because this does not attempt to be anything else but porn in comic form. You have been warned. XD If you want a sweet and loving seme, go look elsewhere. Because he DOES have his moments but he still holds true to who he is in the beginning of their relationship (which is literally all this comic shows; the start of it all.) Now, as mentioned comedy and smut is the focus here and they did that VERY well tbh. The seme is a ruthless mafia member, so his behavior doesn't randomly become cliche romantic, which is not to everybody's liking but it DOES hold true to his character. Because a ruthless mafia killer will NOT, realistically speaking, turn into a blushy sweet romantic as soon as he meets his potential lover. This is something the author did quite well but again; it will not be everybody's cup of tea. His behavior is questionable at least but for who he is it is perfect for his character and gladly the MC didn't randomly turn into a cocksleeve but he actually got into it. This COULD have been done better and with more care, but I think it is decent for what it is despite not being everybody's favourite route in a story. The MC himself is ABSOLUTELY adorable and I find his backstory and personality really great. It makes him feel realistic but at the same time like a typical 'this story will not be a serious and realistic one' kinda vibe. Weird as that might sound. It's a good mishmash. The art is good, but not great in some areas. Anatomy issues here and there are found but it's nothing too major. I wish the character design of the MC was a bit more detailed? Refined? Special? He looks awfully basic tbh. But he DOES make up for it with the comedy chibi art and his cute behavior. The character design of the seme is really great tbh. I like finally seeing a character that doesn't look well-rested and perfect but instead shows his stress and age in his facial details. Again, the storyline might not be everybody's thing but I think the author did well to make it clear this is not something to get emotionally invested in but instead just view it as a king-based reading material to get horny about and laugh at the funny moments and art. Anyone who cannot handle reading things this way should really NOT read this. It's certainly for a more mature audience, not just because of the smut and murder aspect in one moment but because of the overall tone and story needing someone to be capable of removing themselves from what is going on in this piece of fiction that is clearly only aimed at people liking to self-insert as the MC. Which IS a kink of people in sexual fantasies, as much as many people on here like to forget. (￣∇￣") I would certainly recommend this to more mature readers, not age-wise but in terms of mentality. The comedy is great tho it could even be more and carry this story for a hundred chapters together with the base storyline this has (shame it wasn't used for something longer, it would have been amazing for sure!). 8 outta 10, tho bordering a 9 for some people for sure because even if I do not like the forceful aspect of the smut, it was done well enough to actually not be something I minded too much in certain ways if we view it as a self-insert or kink fantasy that can be applied perfectly to oneself. It DOES depend on the person reading tho, no doubt.

I'll make it short by saying; the writing is great, the art amazing, the amount of smut just right, the story perfect (especially the ending) despite it being such a rollercoaster and the characters are all likable in their own way. And I really adore the fact the author put in effort into depicting a mental illness in a realistic way yet making it work in this piece of fiction and giving it some additional factors that make it enhance the story and reading experience. Well done! DEFINITELY worth reading. It may not start off with either of the 'two semes' being likable, but they really grew on my as time went on and as their behavior got explained. Still waiting for an extra chapter tho in which our MC beats the shit outta seme's father tho. THAT would make this absolutely perfect. Or at least gimme a non-canon panel. That would be enough for me already. <3 Definitely a great read for those that appreciate good writing for mature audiences and don't just look for jackoff material with a silly, idealized story that borders fantasy. Also, a good read for people who appreciate realistic depictions of mental illness. Give it a try and let it simmer before you drop it in case the two love interests are not your thing. Even just the basic storyline is interesting and well written enough to read till the end.