ReviewRaptor's manga / #no rape(130)

I think this might be the perfect stalker story, yes?? As A1rkyn mentioned somewhere below. It's odd that the author managed to portray this all so sweetly, in such an interesting way and making it really fluffy despite the stalker topic definitely being anything but. XD Such a great story, especially since it's not starting with non-con but instead the MC enjoys it all. This is probably gonna be my favourite comic for years to come, if it keeps being so perfect. <3

I really love this plot idea of getting isekai'd into your own/a BL story and being the side-dude that adores and gets the uke despite the issue of the original source not being really well-written and having all that much thought put into it. It's a really nice storyline, simple yet effective and this execution here was decently done. Could have been even better with more story focus and less smut focus but oh well. :) Not sure why so many people are giving the story shit tbh, it was quite a good balance between story and smut focus and emotions (albeit all being more comedy-type focused) didn't get neglected to make it something to give minus points for. It was a decent, short story with the typical funny, do-not-take-this-seriously smut main focus yet carried out well since there actually WAS a story that was developed AND a romance told. The expressions were a bit much for my taste here and there, feeling more towards psycho, yandere or creep here and there tbh but the art itself is also decent. More beginner-ish in terms of overall style and anatomy but still decent. Worth a read for anyone that doesn't expect a grand epic love triangle story but instead immediately can recognize this is a light read with lotsa bonking and a silly, idealistic and wholesome love story.

An innocent-type stalker that gets caught by a sadistic seme.

The only thing I do not like is that MC is simply NOT behaving correctly with his brother. I get wanting to be a friendly little family character, but he got sold, wtf are you just letting him back in your life for? Especially without telling him off, slapping him as he needs to be or really beating his ass. The brother is absolute trash but did not have a redemption moment and is just let back into MC's life without anything. That does NOT sit well with me, it isn't right in any form and it's really the only negative point this story has. Besides being too damn short, but I can deal with that. XD Yeah, some points deduction for that part but otherwise this story is LOVELY. <3

First things first: This is smut (it's tagged as ecchi for some reason). Smut is essentially only about fucking and portraying it as much as possible. And as per usual for this genre; there is only minimal story to this. XD Not your thing? Then better look for something else to read. The art is above average based on my standards. It cannot carry but it doesn't have to since the sex scenes are essentially doing that. There are very great panels tho, especially the poses are done very well and in a creative way instead of sticking to basics. There is a mild amount of story, but not much tbh. Works to make it a coherrent story instead of just a collection of porking moments. The story is interesting at it's core, but didn't get integrated enough to make this more than just smut. There IS comedy, but really not enough to warrant the tag tbh. Romance is certainly there but I think it wasn't done well as they jump from one moment to another suddenly being in love, whereas we have really only seen the seme develope feelings for a TINY moment (kinda like love at first sight, but it's only briefly mention). The MC literally goes from 'nah' to 'omg of course I love you!'. Without literally anything indicating the change, even it being in the same exact chapter while all that happened was irrelevant talking and fucking. X'D I think this is very good wank material since there is so much detailed smut and it's even done with a romantic storyline, but it doesn't work as a regular read for someone who might be interested in an actual story being there. Personally I am not a fan of the uke's really weird and ugly looking random drooling (it could have been drawn much better tbh), it even randomly vanishes or appears from one moment to another, which is really weird. But oh well. I think this would have been an exceptional story if the author had put equal effort into the storyline of romance and living, interacting with one another and working and so on instead of just focusing on smut. But it is great as a smut work, that's for sure! I'd recommend this to people looking for fap material but not for those looking for an actual story. Might be a bit much for newcomers so I'd say mid to experienced readers could like this if they are looking for something light and simple. :) It ultimately depends on each person's taste. So give it a try. ^^