ReviewRaptor's manga / #dislikable uke(71)

Great, another one of these sub/dom trash stories that just use the trope to justify displaying abuse and glorifying it. The smut is ugly and a total turn-off as well and the art doesn't save it. Nothing to see. Moving on.

Great, it seems that glorifying and fetishizing murder/murderers is becoming a thing now. At least this one has more logic than the last one and he does NOT let the body rot in his home for days or weeks (which didn't make sense for a public figure in that other trash work). He only lets them lie around for a day or two, even if that also makes no sense. The logic is horseshit, the fetishizing of a killer/psycho is downright sickening and the chapters are jumbled up as fuck early on. DO NOT READ if you have any decent humanoid features, mentally speaking. If this was a story that portrayed a psycho killing for good reasons, wanting to stop and needing to get help with the help of their newfound love, then I'd read it. But this is just subhuman trash for people that think fetishizing, let alone jacking off to murderers (just because they look nice in the artworks) is A-OK. Fuck this. Even the trashiest Omegaverse crap is better than this kinda shit. And THAT's saying alot if you know my feelings about that rape glorification genre...

The story is quite interesting but the execution is really amateur-ish. Kinda like a 14 year old wrote it and didn't quite realize how weird, awkward or downright foolish some of the dialogues/interactions/ways of thinking are. It's not a bad story, unlike I've seen way too many times, but I cannot say it's good either. If it wasn't for the art, I'd probably not bother putting up with the constant child-like logic and skipping large amounts of time to get to the next scene. They have something going here, but I honestly with they went the extra mile and put in more effort to make it a flowing, more detailed story rather than something that feels like a teenager is telling you the draft of their self-insert love story they thought of last night...it would have been one of THE top 5 stories if they did that, I would bet on that. As it is now, it's a nice page-skipper to waste some time, but I cannot say that it's something I would get invested in. I'll stay for the art and possibly smut bits, but that's about it. It's nothing I can recommend, sadly. As much as I'd like to.

The writing and logic of this story is absolute horseshit. The author legit wrote this so half-assed, lighthearted and happy-go-lucky that they made an assault victim apologize?? Yeah, no, fuck that. And that's not the only flaw in logic and basic human reasoning. Considering we are starting off with the story going: Oh, I'm gonna kick you outta my company for fucking my daughter, but since it's a private matter from my kid's life I'll not tell anyone! ------ PROCEEDS TO TELL THE WHOLE COMPANY. And not a lie of him being gay, which would have made sense and could have turned his daughter into a sad little victim, no, he told everyone that she fucked him with a strap-on. WTF IS THIS AUTHOR'S LOGIC????? It's not even funny considering it's THAT dumb. Can't endure more than 4 chapters. You do you if this is your fucked up piece of shit cup of tea, but I'm out. 0 outta 10

To be honest, this is bad on all levels. - The translation is somewhat bad. Feels like it's done with Google translate almost, but not quite. The grammar is passable but not great, making it an unpleasant read. And you can tell that overall the translation is not accurate as many sentences are clearly not what they were meant to mean...which means the translators HAD skill to read the raws but didn't put in the extra effort of making it make sense. - The story itself was interesting at first (ca. 3 to 4 of the currently available 30 chapters), but quite honestly; both of these characters are SO utterly obnoxious (and not even in a cute way) they just make every situation annoying and never had me cheer for them even once. The characters are flat and just overall unpleasant (the uke acts like a cliche girl-like absolutely mega moron, and you can tell the author meant that to be an endearing personality trait... and the seme was supposedly a tough cool-guy but he's just a stupid jackass with no redeeming features other than being good in bed, supposedly anyway) and both are utterly unrealistic in terms of lacking regular human common sense and how they react in situations (it's like a teenager described what they vaguely think adults in a drama act like and another teenager drew up the story board for this). Overall it feels very badly amateur-ish in nature and there is nothing interesting about it past the first 3 or so chapters. - The art is so-so and cannot save this to even be recommended as a page flipper for the smut scenes. Overall, my verdict would be to not waste your time on this. There is nothing good about this unless you have little experience with works of fiction/only read shoujo stories from the early 2000s or such. Skip it, you won't miss anything. It's been ages since I've seen something so utterly boring and disappointing on every front.

EW, just EW. I need to rinse my eyes with bleach after this bullshit. Spare yourself the eye-cancer.

The writing of this is really utterly bad. Unfortunately, since the plot was interesting but I'm done with this constant back and forth and criss and cross of emotions/intentions. This story LITERALLY switches the MCs emotions/intentions from one pannel to the next just to fit the situation. It feels like the author had a scene in mind and couldn't be bothered to think up something cohesive to fit the facial expressions they wanted to draw and just went 'fuck it' and did it randomly. One pannel he hates him, next he likes him secretly, then he wants nothing to do with what's going on and in the next he wants to fuck. WTF is this bi-polar ass mess?? And who tf thought this made any sense. And no, this wasn't just for a short moment, this is the case from the very start, tho it gets progressively worse as you keep reading. It is certainly not a translation issue either, since even then the comic pannels do simply not match. It's just a butchered writing job. (And both the MC and the love interest are weirdly robotic in their common sense department. Like you put a AI in a skinsuit and told it to 'act human'. Also the love interest is a total jackass, but that's the least problem in this story tbh.) This is absolutely confusing and obnoxious to read. The art or base plot cannot save it, it's a waste of time if you're looking for normal human behavior. If you're fine with weird writing that makes it all seem nonsensical or bi-polar in nature; this is your thing for sure. 0 outta 10 - Not ever recommended, spare yourself the waste of time unless you're not looking for good writing or like a bi-polar writing style with no cohesiveness whatsoever.