ReviewRaptor's manga / #dislikable seme(138)

EW, just EW. I need to rinse my eyes with bleach after this bullshit. Spare yourself the eye-cancer.

Puke-worthy, rape bullshit that pretends to have some sort of appeal. The author and whoever actually enjoys this kinda shit should get therapy, seriously.

The writing of this is really utterly bad. Unfortunately, since the plot was interesting but I'm done with this constant back and forth and criss and cross of emotions/intentions. This story LITERALLY switches the MCs emotions/intentions from one pannel to the next just to fit the situation. It feels like the author had a scene in mind and couldn't be bothered to think up something cohesive to fit the facial expressions they wanted to draw and just went 'fuck it' and did it randomly. One pannel he hates him, next he likes him secretly, then he wants nothing to do with what's going on and in the next he wants to fuck. WTF is this bi-polar ass mess?? And who tf thought this made any sense. And no, this wasn't just for a short moment, this is the case from the very start, tho it gets progressively worse as you keep reading. It is certainly not a translation issue either, since even then the comic pannels do simply not match. It's just a butchered writing job. (And both the MC and the love interest are weirdly robotic in their common sense department. Like you put a AI in a skinsuit and told it to 'act human'. Also the love interest is a total jackass, but that's the least problem in this story tbh.) This is absolutely confusing and obnoxious to read. The art or base plot cannot save it, it's a waste of time if you're looking for normal human behavior. If you're fine with weird writing that makes it all seem nonsensical or bi-polar in nature; this is your thing for sure. 0 outta 10 - Not ever recommended, spare yourself the waste of time unless you're not looking for good writing or like a bi-polar writing style with no cohesiveness whatsoever.

This reads like someone told their friend about a really cool sex scene they thought of and then said: "I wanna make this into a comic!". Then the friend replies: "But a comic needs to have plot and such, right?". And the creators reply was simply: "Well, we'll cross that bridge when we get to it....". This seriously has SUCH heavy raw draft vibes, I can't even. Like the only planned out thing was 'sex scene' and the rest was just thrown together nilly willy. I think this might turn out to be yet another one of those smut comics that would have been better off as a 'silent' art reel. Because so far the writing is confusing, lacking and very amateurish in nature. And I don't think it'll get better, unless this was a 2-part promo upload. Which I doubt....

Just was reminded I had to catch up on chapters here so lemme just say this: It's getting a bit on my nerves to see JJs character jump from those hint-type denial moments in which it SEEMS like he realized his feelings for Dan back to him beign a total fuckwit that's not aware of basic human emotions like NOT finding it pleasant to get screwed by someone that has treated you like dogshit. I wish the author would finally PICK something to go with. I was also hoping we FINALLY get the start of JJs character developement in chapter 64, because Dan's words as he left and JJs expressions seemed to indicate that Dan's words had quite the heavy hit to them. But then chapter 65 starts and POOF, nothing at all settled into his dumbfuckerish head and he's back to being the usual jackass. I'm tired of these things. So tired. At this point I'm honestly contemplating writing up a fanfiction that does a better job than this. Just to get some sorta satisfactory developements. ╥﹏╥ The only thing that makes me truly happy is seeing Dan actually be done with JJs shit. That's a really great developement and I hope it's not magically undone by Granny leaving the cast and JJs patting his head for a minute. (I swear I will punch a european wall if this happens.)

Yeah no thanks. If I want to see rape I'll just go to the old classics. The art is very nice but the plot is horseshit. Enjoy to whoever likes this fvcked up stuff but I'm out. Gotta cleanse my eyes with something after this. :D