ReviewRaptor's manga / #dislikable seme(138)

Ballad of the Back Alley

Ongoing | Haruta Jack | 2020 released
2022-09-08 23:16 marked

Brother In Law Assault

Complete | Akino mori | 2019 released

Murderer Llewellyn's enchanting dinner invitation

Complete | Sum Na Gi,Muk Bu | 2000 released

Great, it seems that glorifying and fetishizing murder/murderers is becoming a thing now. At least this one has more logic than the last one and he does NOT let the body rot in his home for days or weeks (which didn't make sense for a public figure in that other trash work). He only lets them lie around for a day or two, even if that also makes no sense. The logic is horseshit, the fetishizing of a killer/psycho is downright sickening and the chapters are jumbled up as fuck early on. DO NOT READ if you have any decent humanoid features, mentally speaking. If this was a story that portrayed a psycho killing for good reasons, wanting to stop and needing to get help with the help of their newfound love, then I'd read it. But this is just subhuman trash for people that think fetishizing, let alone jacking off to murderers (just because they look nice in the artworks) is A-OK. Fuck this. Even the trashiest Omegaverse crap is better than this kinda shit. And THAT's saying alot if you know my feelings about that rape glorification genre...

Sugar Rain

Ongoing | Jang-Ryang,Tanyoon,RATA | 2000 released

The story is quite interesting but the execution is really amateur-ish. Kinda like a 14 year old wrote it and didn't quite realize how weird, awkward or downright foolish some of the dialogues/interactions/ways of thinking are. It's not a bad story, unlike I've seen way too many times, but I cannot say it's good either. If it wasn't for the art, I'd probably not bother putting up with the constant child-like logic and skipping large amounts of time to get to the next scene. They have something going here, but I honestly with they went the extra mile and put in more effort to make it a flowing, more detailed story rather than something that feels like a teenager is telling you the draft of their self-insert love story they thought of last night...it would have been one of THE top 5 stories if they did that, I would bet on that. As it is now, it's a nice page-skipper to waste some time, but I cannot say that it's something I would get invested in. I'll stay for the art and possibly smut bits, but that's about it. It's nothing I can recommend, sadly. As much as I'd like to.

Beware of the Full Moon In March

Ongoing | Choi song | 2019 released

Profundis

Ongoing | eise,joeun | 2019 released

Except for the artwork and the basic plot of demon invasion and such, this story has ZERO interesting points. I'm fine with a but of poly, or people doing it when hating each other, but this is just rape excusatory galore without any redeemable or hopeful features. If the MC was at least into it himself, I'd be fine with it, but he gets raped every other corner and the author makes the writing pretend we're supposed to be cool with it. And from what I've seen so far, the novel has NO positive aspects either, so i doubt the comic will turn out different. You do you, if you have some mental problems and find actual rape stories something you can get your rocks off to, go for it. Anyone else with a shred of empathy and sanity left: Bail. You'll be better off without it. 0 outta 10 actually for the rape filled and excusatory story itself. 8 outta 10 for the artwork.

Into the Rose Garden

Ongoing | MEG,Winterbaum,Gazealle | 2023 released

Happy Shitty Life

Ongoing | Harada | 2000 released

The writing and logic of this story is absolute horseshit. The author legit wrote this so half-assed, lighthearted and happy-go-lucky that they made an assault victim apologize?? Yeah, no, fuck that. And that's not the only flaw in logic and basic human reasoning. Considering we are starting off with the story going: Oh, I'm gonna kick you outta my company for fucking my daughter, but since it's a private matter from my kid's life I'll not tell anyone! ------ PROCEEDS TO TELL THE WHOLE COMPANY. And not a lie of him being gay, which would have made sense and could have turned his daughter into a sad little victim, no, he told everyone that she fucked him with a strap-on. WTF IS THIS AUTHOR'S LOGIC????? It's not even funny considering it's THAT dumb. Can't endure more than 4 chapters. You do you if this is your fucked up piece of shit cup of tea, but I'm out. 0 outta 10

Neighbor's Rice Cake

Ongoing | Baekkyung | 2022 released

To be honest, this is bad on all levels. - The translation is somewhat bad. Feels like it's done with Google translate almost, but not quite. The grammar is passable but not great, making it an unpleasant read. And you can tell that overall the translation is not accurate as many sentences are clearly not what they were meant to mean...which means the translators HAD skill to read the raws but didn't put in the extra effort of making it make sense. - The story itself was interesting at first (ca. 3 to 4 of the currently available 30 chapters), but quite honestly; both of these characters are SO utterly obnoxious (and not even in a cute way) they just make every situation annoying and never had me cheer for them even once. The characters are flat and just overall unpleasant (the uke acts like a cliche girl-like absolutely mega moron, and you can tell the author meant that to be an endearing personality trait... and the seme was supposedly a tough cool-guy but he's just a stupid jackass with no redeeming features other than being good in bed, supposedly anyway) and both are utterly unrealistic in terms of lacking regular human common sense and how they react in situations (it's like a teenager described what they vaguely think adults in a drama act like and another teenager drew up the story board for this). Overall it feels very badly amateur-ish in nature and there is nothing interesting about it past the first 3 or so chapters. - The art is so-so and cannot save this to even be recommended as a page flipper for the smut scenes. Overall, my verdict would be to not waste your time on this. There is nothing good about this unless you have little experience with works of fiction/only read shoujo stories from the early 2000s or such. Skip it, you won't miss anything. It's been ages since I've seen something so utterly boring and disappointing on every front.

Fukigen na Kemono no Itoshikata

Ongoing | irihi maro | 2019 released

It's so-so. The art is nice but the attempt of mixing average fantasy and Omegaverse-like settings just doesn't work for me. If there are average humans and 'beastmen' walking about, naturally speaking, a human would never be affected by a beastman's pheromones...we just don't have the capacity for that. Now, if the author had gone for the MC being part beastman, then I'd have found no fault here but a regular human doesn't 'fall into heat' just because a beastman nearby is horny. At least call it some sort of magic, then yeah, that might work just fine, but not like this. The art is decent so if you ignore the plot faults and it's rushed writing just to get to the smut scenes, then it's an okay read. You do you, read it or leave it. But I for one don't really find this investing or immersive. It's average at best but a good enough pageflipper I suppose. 3 outta 10 - Not really recommendable tho since it's just too boring and only has the artstyle and smut scenes going for it (which are ALSO rushed along a bit...so even there I'd only give half a point).