ReviewRaptor's manga / #dislikable seme(109)

I liked how it started out, but then the artworks somehow became worse the further I read (seriously, some of those faces are just hideous and/or hilarious to look at). I get the plot: Masochist falls in love and gets dominated and so on. But honestly, it felt rushed and off in many ways. The uke was interesting but the seme was nothing more than a jerk from what was shown. And there were too many things that were left out to save pannels (aka, that lubing up scene was damn important but was entirely left out). As nice as the basic plot is...the execution isn't good. Even the errors in translation don't feel awkward since it fits the lacking plot and art issues to some extend. Not really recommended unless you don't mind flaws and scrapped scenes, dialogue and lack of reactions/emotions displayed.

First chapter is already a mess. The seme is hinted to be a dark, twisted guy (somewhat) and then we cut right back to peaceful and friendly athmosphere and ignore those hints. Which feels off and somehow as if the author didn't think things through or jumbled up multiple stories into one. Many scenes feel just rushed and some make little to no sense. I'm not sure this is worth a read. For those who like the first chapter, maybe it is, but I prefer things that flow smoothly and don't feel chaotic and random. 2/10