ReviewRaptor's manga / #amateur art AND writing(2)

The art AND writing feels lackluster, rushed, random and honestly like a young teen wrote it. The romance is rushed and random, weird really. And the art is mid and very inconsistent. The base story is interesting, especially since the ML isn't your typical rapey jackass Alpha (yet), but I honestly cannot feel immersed in this. I keep loosing interest AS I read. Mainly because the MC has such an utterly obnoxious literal toddler type behavior, ALL THE TIME. XD Probably a real good read for younger people, but not for mature readers with sense of quality, pacing and whatnot. ________________ This story really is an odd mix of sweet romance and obnoxious toddler-adult MC cringe. Which is why it's so hard to commit to reading OR dropping. Because one aspect is really making me want to see the romance, but the other (the literal toddler-type MC personality) really makes me just fed up because he is extremely unappealing to me. Having this odd mix is a first and it's honestly impressive to see. That might just be a talent in and of itself; mangaing to have people be torn inbetween decisions. Kudos to the writer for that. XD But the writing is decent and the comedic moments are great. Which is why I think this could make for a great adio drama or even an anime! The writing is honestly very cringey at times tho. Like that absolute wtf moment which I hope was a mistranslation or made up one at the early chapters: If you can cum it's love. And that wasn't even said as a joke in the moment. WTF? That threw me off into another zipcode. (⊙ ▽⊙ ) I honestly don't know what to say about this as it's such an inbetween thing for me. It's neither fully likable nor dislikable. Which is a first honestly. But I think if people, for some reason, like the MC acting like a literal child 24/7 and want to see their romance and drama unfold, this is likely an absolute amazing read. I for one really do not like the MCs personality tho, so I cannot fully enjoy it.

The writing is really not well thought through and honestly nonsensical half the time. Not a fan of the character personalities (everyone feels weird or shallow somehow), art or overall plot that is often weird or random either. The translations being off in terms of grammar doesn't help either. Younger readers can probably have a blast with this. But seasoned readers might wanna look for something else.