ReviewRaptor's manga / #actual rape(80)

People: Gather your gasmasks immediately! Someone's burning the toxic garbage in industrial size here. XD Holy shit was this fvcked seven days till sunday and back. And people honestly keep mentioning JJ from Jinx when it's about toxic people, meanwhile this shit happily exists in our universe. JJ is a true sweet gentleman compared to this mofo. Not sure if I should laugh or cry about this realization. I have little to complain, it WAS announcing itself big and heavy as toxic right from the start, but I think it's just a bit bland in terms of the characters just not being appealing in any way except physically thanks to the art. I like my toxic garbage with at least a tiny flavour of redeemable qualities, but oh well. If people like fvcked up shit, this is probably one of the go-to smuts I guess.

And ANOTHER one for the shitty omegaverse list. Can these authors stop being degenerates please?

Critique ahead, beware. They are just purely comedic. In every way. And that is what you need to keep in mind when reading this; it's NOT serious, it's NOT that deep and does not wanna be, so do yourself a favour and read it as a comedy-smut comic instead of trying to criticize their behavior or reasoning. It's your own fault if you take this serious past the first chapter, really. XD The writing is decent but simple, since it IS just porn with plot (aka smut). This, again, makes it clear this should not be taken serious or have anyone critique character behavior, smut is focused on sex, not realism. Anything goes to achieve the bonking. ╮(￣▽￣)╭ This really is a more simple comic which really should be read by people who can manage to just laugh something off/ignore something the same as the character it is happening to, not getting emotionally invested in literally anything even if the mood isn't for it (however the fuck you manage to do THAT with an absurd comedy-porn setting like this, that's magic really, so please refrain from casting your spells!). Take it as a light read for comedy and sex scenes and you're good. The characters are more comedy-oriented than realistic but I do believe their behavior is plenty realistic in certain ways if you consider people like each of them DO infact exist irl, althought not so commonly. But it might not be everybody's cup of tea that there are actual people who, after being sex workers, are capable of shrugging of creepy stalker rapist incidents. Again, this is possible irl but this comic made no big deal out of it as it would simply NOT fit the entire character that was established and the general mood. (Author could have left it out tbh, maybe just making the creep undress him forcefully and it could have resulted in the exact same situation.) The art is decent but it's nothing special. The funny expressions are great tho! There is effort put into the sexual scenes but not in a high level, mid-tier I'd say. The artstyle is not unpleasant but not beautiful either, so if the comedy or romance cannot keep you, the art probably will not either. It's a taste-based thing. I would recommend this to anyone that wants a laugh and some smut alongside it, but stay away if you have the bad habit of getting too personally invested in even the most blatantly comedy-based stories that have a non-chalant character actually be non-chalant about anything that happens to him because he's used to it. It's not a good thing to do anyway but I know for a fact someone will get offended on behalf of this character even if the author made clear this comic is basically like a slapstick Tom & Jerry/Bugs Bunny cartoon moment. ╮(￣▽￣)╭ Anyway, recommended for more mature readers I suppose. It depends on your tastes tho!

Okay, no. Review Time, so bail if you don't wanna hear critique. The base plot was interesting (play a salesman to get dirt on an actor) but things quickly turned to shit in just one chapter. And I am not bothering with more of this. If the story had a more comedy-based tone and if there wasn't actual rape with the victim actually being afraid, the 'plottwist' would have been able to be laughed off for the most part. But it's not. It is held in a more realistic, serious tone and hence the happenings are NOT option to shrug off. The tone of the story is more realistic/casual, or empty I should say really, so the fact the MC was actually scared and things still went on really was NOT pleasant. And the sorry and sad attempt of the author just shrugging it off did not work since neither the MC actually got into what was happening to him nor did the rapist actually have a pleasant personality and the MC's so-called friend too did the opposite of what was needed to make any of this acceptable even as a porn-type fantasy read (who is REALLY a piece of shit btw for doing this). The idea was nice, but it was entirely ruined by lack of everything. The art cannot carry this either, it's average and has no panels here and there that actually hook you in a moment at least. Not even the smut scenes are worth more than a glance as there is nothing special about those either. Which could have maybe saved this from getting an entirely negative review. As I said; I will not bother with this past the first chapter. Maybe the writing after that will be decent or good, but if the intro is horseshit that means the rest is also horseshit. Based on seeing much horseshit over the years, I speak from frequent experience. :'D This might be a nice read for people who disregard literally any sort of writing skills but for those that need the story and character behavior to be at least somewhat pleasant: Look elsewhere. I wouldn't bother recommending this, ever. There is literally nothing positive I can find about this except the VERY core plotline. Which I hope someone more talented will copy someday, but oh well. ^^;

I really need to remember to check info before just reading when bored. I am getting flashbacks to my early days of fucked up yaoi reading. I should have checked the author name. ╥﹏╥ Now I gotta go look for fluff to cleanse my memory. Which will take years. AGAIN. I just had forgotten most horrors of Harada after these 10 years! (╯°Д °)╯╧╧ Anyway, even if this is still a 'happy story' from Harada: Stay away if you cannot stand the following. - Parents pimping out their children - Child R@pe & Prostitution (Christ on a stick, get the holy waterfall for me please) - Shitty parents behaving like trash and not being sorry - General Whores, both bottoms and tops - Regular rape - Prostitution because you have literally nothing else in life - People treating the MC like trash and a fleshlight - Betrayal in various colours of the rainbow - and some more things I am trying to forget already If you're looking to be sad and disgusted as well as mentally scarred: This is for you! :D If you want to keep your sanity: Run. RUN. RUN NOW. And don't you EVER read any other works from this author! There's a good fuckin' reason the term Harada-esque was coined after this author created so many fucked up stories they became the god of the genre and all other creators works were judged by their standards of writing fucked up shit. Spare yourself the years of haunting. I know the writing is good, but that is only to lure you in before you get the hell beaten outta your innocent mind! RUN. Do not become like me, child!!!! （/TДT)/