ReviewRaptor's manga / #actual rape(88)

Shitty in every possible way. The plot is horseshit, the characters are either disgusting or dumb as fuck and even the art seems lackluster and halfassed when it comes to what they might want you to call 'colouring'. Spare yourself the wasted time and look for something else. Except of course if you're one of those sick fucks that gets off by actual rape and dumb as shit characters that magically fall in love with their rapist. Then go ahead and read this. I would burn this if I had bought this as a comic. It's pure garbage.

The baseplot is very interesting but the execution is...lackluster at best. It wasn't so bad at first, things felt a bit amateur-ish but were still good but once the 'evil schemes' part began...things fell entirely apart. There is a time and place for having lighthearted, chibi moments in serious scenes but...this work just uses it ALL the time. Which makes everything feel like it's being taken barely serious, yes even the RAPE, and all in all it makes the characters just unpleasant. Not in a 'he's a villain so he's unpleasant' way, but in a 'he's supposed to be the villain so why does the art portray this moment like it's some cutesy chibi, fun time?? wtf?'. That just ruins everything. I don't know if this is an amateurs work, but this could really REALLY do with a rework sometime. Less focused on funny faces and more on seriousness. Otherwise it's really not a good read, unpleasant overall and kinda leaves a bad taste in your mouth if you're mature enough to put yourself into the story and understand how flatout inapproriate the comedy-based depictions are in many parts of the story. I would advise to skip this, or at least ONLY read up to the part where they go on their first date as per the seme's request. After that, stop reading to spare yourself the bad writing.

Sorry, but this manga shows perfectly what's fucked up about the Omegaverse community. Their first time was nothing but rape, if their roles were reversed you fuckers would be condemning the Alpha for forcing himself onto the Omega, but because the roles are as they are you guys actually cheer this on. WTF, shame on you guys. Get therapy. The Alpha might be a bit arrogant and deserving of being put in place a bit, but the Omega is nothing short of a psycho. If he hadn't forced himself onto the Alpha, I'd actually recommend this. But like this? No thanks. You can keep this fucked up piece of trash in the garbage bin where it belongs. The art might be nice but the story is trash. And I know not everyone is cheering the Omega on, but DAMN are there a lot of idiots who do. FFS this Omegaverse community brings forth the biggest trash, not gonna lie. 0 outta 10 - Avoid reading. Don't be fooled by the pretty art.

It's interesting and a nice read but...I really epected something more tbh. It's simply a bit underwhelming and ends up reading more like someone had to come up with a quick ending instead of thinking things through to the end as intricately and interestingly as the beginning was. The writing is very jump-cutish at times and I KNOW what the author tried going for but it didn't end up working in these cases. The romance-writing aspect of this really isn't great from the middle to the end, very amateur-ish or lackluster at least, and what little smut there is is also not worth mentioning. The art is good, the Omega isn't your average brain-dead cocksleeve when he goes into heat, the alpha isn't an arrogant jackass but even so, it's nothing I'll remember for longer than a day or two and I honestly wouldn't bother recommending this. It's just too boring despite it having a potential-filled starting point. 3 to 4 out of 10. A time-waster at best but nothing more.

Great, another one of these sub/dom trash stories that just use the trope to justify displaying abuse and glorifying it. The smut is ugly and a total turn-off as well and the art doesn't save it. Nothing to see. Moving on.