ReviewRaptor's manga / #Yakuza(18)

I swear to any deity that may exist: If I find out who does these false updates, I'll find out where you live and release a thousand camel fleas and unleash them onto your asshole. FUCKING STOP.

While the plot is interesting, again, like so often: The execution is very lacking. It's incredibly rushed, it skips scenes that are important and immerse the reader or just bring the characters alive, just so it can quickly go to the screwing around scenes. Good for jack-off material maybe, but this is clearly not trying to be smut but a fully fleshed out story...which it falls short on in every way. The art is decent and the plot interesting, but I'll probably only skim through pages to enjoy the art. It's not worth reading actively, so to speak. As sad as that is. :/

Also; for anyone complaining: Please learn to read genre tags and google their meanings. Because they SHOULD have been a clear warning. EDIT after chapter 5: Regarding the last chapter (5), I think the author could have spend half a page more to make the angry feelings build up before the outburst of our impressive yakuza boy and a but more romance feelings settling in or giving in to the confession of Kiyotaka. Those emotional aspects fell a little short there. If they actually had put more emphasis on those two parts, this would have been close to perfect. <3 It's still a lovely, simple and short n sweet story. I really hope this author graces us with LOTS of impressive stories in the future. There was a moment I got some old school Norikazu Akira vibes in terms of storytelling, tho Akira certainly had more focus on typical flowery romances, comedy and threw in more sex. Still reminded me of that author's type of stories here and there and using a more mature-targeted artstyle. Which I love~. Either way, this is definitely worth a quick read if you're not looking for some fantastical stories or tons of mindless fucking but rather enjoy a quick, realistically toned and more mature story. :)