ReviewRaptor's manga / #Webtoon(15)

Plot and MC are as dumb as a bag of rocks. The writing is a bit amateur-ish, but it's overall just the typical shoujo kinda 'convenient happenings' to lead from one happening to another as quick as possible. Whther it feels rushed or realistic be damned. It's not interesting and honestly a bit annoying, and that with only 3 chapters... Hard pass for me.

This story is nice and all, but here's how you can make it better: Tell white truck-kun to pay blonde boy a visit. NOW. FFS, he's the most obnoxious character I've seen in years. EDIT 1: I really kinda hope that chapter 20 has some language/translation barrier problems because...if he REALLY asked her to start dating (like, boyfriend-girlfriend stuff) and NOT dating as in a sense to making talking appointments then...this story just went from good to horseshit. Fingers crossed it was a language/translation thing. I really would hate to see this go downhill in the writing department...

I'll make it short by saying; the writing is great, the art amazing, the amount of smut just right, the story perfect (especially the ending) despite it being such a rollercoaster and the characters are all likable in their own way. And I really adore the fact the author put in effort into depicting a mental illness in a realistic way yet making it work in this piece of fiction and giving it some additional factors that make it enhance the story and reading experience. Well done! DEFINITELY worth reading. It may not start off with either of the 'two semes' being likable, but they really grew on my as time went on and as their behavior got explained. Still waiting for an extra chapter tho in which our MC beats the shit outta seme's father tho. THAT would make this absolutely perfect. Or at least gimme a non-canon panel. That would be enough for me already. <3 Definitely a great read for those that appreciate good writing for mature audiences and don't just look for jackoff material with a silly, idealized story that borders fantasy. Also, a good read for people who appreciate realistic depictions of mental illness. Give it a try and let it simmer before you drop it in case the two love interests are not your thing. Even just the basic storyline is interesting and well written enough to read till the end.