ReviewRaptor's manga / #Waste of Time(2)

This is a good example of one of those webtoons based on the concept of drama for drama's sake just so the story can be longer. And why the hell do all these webtoons skip from the moment the person gets pregnant up to the point where the kid is several years old!? WTF?? You basically cut of a very crucial, character building and empathy building part just to get on with the story. It's annoying and makes things boring tbh. And more often than not: it makes your work predictable as can be if you use that 'mEcHaNiC' while writing. This is a halfassed story tbh. It's a plot we've seen multiple times, does nothing new and the few things that are of substance are boring and lackluster. It's a page-flicker at best but not even that is enjoyable. Not recommended, at all. Better look for another story that uses this exact plot and I'm sure you can indeed find a good one that's somewhat enjoyable to read.

The characters behave random sometimes, the storytelling is rushed and lacks detail when needed and the overall vibes this gives is 'halfassed'. The dude supposedly looks like another dude, but even the girl that had a cruch on said other dude doesn't even mention it. The mYsTeRiOuS secret can be seen from a mile away and the characters are just too bland to make this interesting. Neither the story nor the chars are interesting tbh. The story itself is one of the most bland and boring plots I've seen in ages. Even the most cliche and predictable shoujo highschool romance has more oomph to it. WTF.