ReviewRaptor's manga / #WASTED POTENTIAL(1)

This one made me angry tbh. It had SO MUCH potential, but the filthily rushed execution fucked it over entirely. If this is based on a novel, I hope someone with decent writing skills will re-do it, but as it is you can only flip through the pages as you would with an artbook because: the story is at it's core great but the rushed aspect makes it horseshit, the dialogue is like a 12 year old thirsty fujoshi wrote it but didn't know how to make a fucking reasonable connection between one scene and the other and while the artwork is indeed great...that's all there is you can pay attention to. If you make the mistake to read sentences, you'll be left confused, annoyed and potentially so disconnected from what was going on that you just wanna move one already and read something else. It's really sad this turned into trash so quick. Nevermind the shitty translation work, the story itself is just rushed and feels disconnected from one scene to the next, like they couldn't give less of a shit about writing a connection scene and just wanted to have them fuck...which didn't work either since the angry dude went from IMMA KILL U to PLEASE FUCK ME HARDER within ONE scene skip...without any reasoning or build-up LET ALONE an inner monologue of suddenly changing his mind and being horny and up for it...which would be THE bare minimum to do. Skip this entirely or just look at the art, otherwise it's trash. Sadly. It could have been a gem if they had tried.