ReviewRaptor's manga / #UGLY ART(7)

WTF is even this?? The artist could have at least TRIED to get the hang of human anatomy before trying to serialize a story, no? There is literally NO standard for anatomy, not the bodies or faces. On the first page already you see a bearded guy with a tiny girls hand, people who's eyes are drifting apart and try to meet at the back of the head, a character looks like different ones in different panels and SO FUCKING ON. The character profiles made me hopeful, but I'm not gonna bother looking at this mess. I have at least a tiny bit of standards in that regard and this doesn't meet it in the slightest.

Fuckin' scam promo art and the actual artwork is all those fucking moonfaces. I can't look at this shit. XD Dropped, not gonna bother with balloon-heads.

Really not into this due to the art and partially the story. The art is horribly inconsistent and the story has a slight hint of r/im14andthisisdeep, if you know what I mean. XD It's not bad and surely people who do NOT at all care about art will find this a good read, but the art itself already makes it not enjoyable to me and the story isn't really worth putting up with the visual annoyance tbh. Check it out for yourself, but I find nothing of interest here. IF this is based on a novel, I would suggest reading that instead.

The art is VERY wonky, all the time, and feels like different models or references were used to scribble over to get the panels. The main character isn't really bland or overly interesting, as is the plot. Nothing new or special, tho that is only because the writing just didn't work. If the writing WAS done better, the plotline could have been more interesting. This oddly enough shows all the flaws that chinese works often have (even the almost or entirely random chibi funny haha moments thrown in 'just cause'). And given the detox and whatnot (as it's done here, typical chinese preferences from what i saw in the past), it surprises me to see a japanese name for the author. Not that this couldn't just be a choice to camo as one, but still. It's weird. I wouldn't recommend this. Maybe for beginners to see if they would be interested in longer stories or these types of isekai-ish plots, but even then; there are much better ones out there. If the author is new, I recommend practicing more, on all fronts. Since there is alot of room for improvement but the baseline is already good enough to work with.