The baseplot is very interesting but the execution is...lackluster at best.
It wasn't so bad at first, things felt a bit amateur-ish but were still good but once the 'evil schemes' part began...things fell entirely apart. There is a time and place for having lighthearted, chibi moments in serious scenes but...this work just uses it ALL the time. Which makes everything feel like it's being taken barely serious, yes even the RAPE, and all in all it makes the characters just unpleasant. Not in a 'he's a villain so he's unpleasant' way, but in a 'he's supposed to be the villain so why does the art portray this moment like it's some cutesy chibi, fun time?? wtf?'. That just ruins everything.
I don't know if this is an amateurs work, but this could really REALLY do with a rework sometime. Less focused on funny faces and more on seriousness. Otherwise it's really not a good read, unpleasant overall and kinda leaves a bad taste in your mouth if you're mature enough to put yourself into the story and understand how flatout inapproriate the comedy-based depictions are in many parts of the story.
I would advise to skip this, or at least ONLY read up to the part where they go on their first date as per the seme's request. After that, stop reading to spare yourself the bad writing.
No more Innocence