ReviewRaptor's manga / #TOO SHORT(218)

This was such a wholesome, lovely story. <3 I wish it was a little longer and showed them some more before getting together or easing into the now dating situation, but this is a great read as is. It#s the simple, detailed enough but not too detailed, japanese manga I grew up with and loved ever since. Tho this one even lacks the typical 'rival appears' or 'misundertsanding' trope to cause drama, that was VERY nice~ Definitely recommended.

The falling in love fell a bit short and felt too emotionless in a way, but all in all I really love this!

A nice and simple story, no unneeded drama that elongates the story just for the purpose of making it longer, no hate-able characters. Just the good old type of manga that's a nice read. <3 I do think tho that some questions should have been answered since they were hinted at being mysterious or having reason behind them. Such as: Where ML ran off to or why he does that, why he refused the chocolate, if he actually had a female-related trauma because his strong reaction very much suggested that, etc.. I also think this story would have benefitted more from working on actually developing the romance and emotions instead of just going for 'romance because they fuck alot'. I have never liked that sorta stuff, because it makes the romance seem shallow, bland or badly thought out. Often it feels random, which somewhat was the case here too. It just happened from one moment to another, for BOTH of them, just at seperate times. No hint at any big change of feelings for specific reasons we were clearly shown. Pretty sure the story would have benefitted from being romance focused instead of smut focused. But it is what it is. Still decent enough tho. I really like the setting of actor co-workers, I am kinda starved for those stories (any recommendations are appreciated btw). So I'm quite happy this story actually used that setup thoroughly instead of just an entrance point. It could have gone even harder into that direction tho, that would have been fun to see. :) One way or another; a good read without any major grand happenings that elongate the plot. Definetly good when you are looking to spend some time on a casual story for some time in the afternoon, when you want to immerse yourself into another setting for a short time.

No unneeded drama, characters that feel realistic and a perfect fit for each other and the overall details are just right. Not too much bonking, not too little, plenty of life details but not too much to get boring. Definitely a great read. I would have loved more chapters but it's great as is! <3

This was way too short, it was SO good! XD This author has great skill when it comes to hilarious comedy moments with perfectly matching expressions/reactions from the characters. 2 comics so far seem worthy of becoming animes. This one is a good read for sure. Short but gold. The story is simple and on point, with a focus on comedy. Worth every moment, but that's it: It's WAY too short! I want more! ╥△╥

I could honestly see this being the plot of a grand movie. The comic is a tiny bit clunky in certain ways, I think it could have been much better with more emotional impact along the way, detailed and emotional narration and such. But it's a great read as is. Simple, on point and lovely. Good read, so definitely recommended.

Both stories are just adorable. All characters are endearing and feel realistic. The pacing could be a tad slower and more detailed but it's a good read regardless because it works well with what it has. Would honestly say this would be worth an anime (not long enough I suppose tho) because this would be such a sweet romance to see animated, I can totally picture the soft, watercolour type shots of them smiling and blushing, surrounded by flowers. Those scenes were just beautiful. Would totally have been worth a full page illustration with lots of details every now and then. <3 Definitely recommended. It's simple and quick but the stories and characters worth experiencing.

My review: https://www.mangago.me/home/mangatopic/19070082/ The story itself as a base setup is EXACTLY what I always wanted, but it having such creepy, nonsensical and quite frankly rape-y aspects to it make it more of a dissapointment than me screaming with joy. That made it meh, because this is literally the exact same nonsense as a typical smut hentai: abandoning all reason because the MC randomly feels good and then becomes an obedient cocksleeve. XD Great fap material. Great disappointment for those who hoped for something like a romance even in a very small way. The art is really great btw, some really interesting poses, angles and so on. Could have done without the dumb smut ahega-ho faces tho. Give it a try, but don't expect more than just fucking. Because that's all it is. Sadly.