ReviewRaptor's manga / #SHOUJO(206)

Ch. 62

I really like the story, but the very sudden, unexplained scene changes really are a bit confusing at times and break the immersion. I find it highly likely that this is not the same as in the novel, if this is based on one. Which I find all the more bothersome since, with smooth transitions and explainations, this comic would be a great read. I'm only on chapter 5 so far but I really hope the author doesn't keep doing this. The constant moments of "Why the fvck are we suddenly in a room with people that never appeared before??" is a bit annoying tbh. XD In general, the author could really need some taking time (it really feels almost like rushing sometimes) and ESPECIALLY with explainations in the important parts. It's weird they decided to gush over the prince as he randomly appeared after a scene change that confused me, yet neither the second brother nor the aunt got even so much as a sign with a name and title to introduce them. In a novel this might work, since you write it like this: "[insert dialogue]", said the MCs red-haired aunt angrily while slapping her fan into her hands. Leaving the description after the dialogue entirely out is NOT a good way to re-do a script into a comic. You NEED to mention who the person is if the situation makes them important (which an angry family member out of thin air definitely is XD). I'll keep reading, but if these issues keep appearing this might become a chore or annoyance that could make me change my mind on wanting to see this story unfold. It's really not pleasant for a experienced reader/writer. :')

Realistic clothes but a Mary Sue-type logic plot in many aspects. Kinda a r/im14andthisisdeep vibe in many aspects. If you like Mary Sue logic and fich-eyed girls, this is totally for you tho!