ReviewRaptor's manga / #SHOUJO(214)

The writing irks me. They said the dragons can only concieve with true love, yet then they say that society for dragons is utterly sexist and kids naturally don't need to give a shit about their fathers. None of that adds up when it comes to world building. It's stupid, if anything. Not sure if this is a translation mishap, but as it reads here it's really idiotic to throw these two things into the same world. Or at least the same dragon clan. If it was a different clan then it could be made to make sense, but not like this. People gotta stop blaming the father when all of what is currently happening is entirely the mothers fault. And for absolutely ZERO good reason as well. She's a hundred times worse than the father. The father's behavior is at least understandable considering he has no emotions and acts accordingly AND views her as a threat because people have sent kids to make use of him or hurt him before. The mother's actions have no excuse. No good, sensical ones anyway. Dooming her child to be raised by racist bitches who treat her worse than a stray dog, ensuring her supposed loved one gets incredibly hurt AND the father and daughter cannot be with each other after the curse does it's thing. Everything was NOT needed to happen. The father's behavior has an excuse/reason, her's doesn't. And I doubt the author can magically pull one out of their ass that would justify it all. But I guess we'll see about that. (〜￣△￣)〜

Can we talk about how obnoxiously written the MC is at times? The writing at the start was so great, but it's gone to shit now. Hopefully that'll change asap. Otherwise this was such a waste of time and great art. :/ RANT, clearly, so you have been warned. I reached chapter 40 now and OH MY FUCKING GOD, this is getting annoying. There was literally ONE panel inbetween the MC's thought of "maybe he DOES like me! so happy~ :3" - then he smiles at her and touches her cheek - MC goes "oh no, he's truly just doing this to hurt me.". Shut. The Fuck. UP. tf is wrong with you?? XD I do not think this is due to faulty translations, but one way or another this is the most stupid thing I have seen in writing in quite a while. At least PRETEND you are trying to give her reason to think like this instead of it just being random and clearly only being a thing so we can drag the story's obnoxious pretend-drama. #－.－) If this stuff happens again, I'll honestly drop this. Because writing flaws like this drive me up a wall, as you might be able to tell. I can forgive silly shoujo schoolgirl manga logic here and there, but at least stories of that sort try to give the change of thought REASON. Which this MC literally has zero of except for her dumb friend telling her and she immediately thinking that is reality. Which is probably the utmost obnoxious trait a person can exhibit: Someone told me, so it's the truth and I won't even bother looking at reality. 'Cause; drama be drama-ing. (=・ω・=) I already dislike her friend for being the way she is, but if the MC turns into the same type of annoyance, I'll honestly be disappointed. The baseplot is SO good and the writing good for 40 chapters, please do not make this turn into a cringey, toxic telenovela now. ╥﹏╥