ReviewRaptor's manga / #SHITTY LOGIC(14)

Okay, can we just once, for the love of anything ever holy, have THIS scenario and have the two cheated people team up and collectively kick the asses of the cheaters? Is that really too much realism for Bl to ask for?? I mean, sure, the fuckwit who defended his apparently constantly cheating boyfriend is already a lost cause, but I would still love to have some characters at least have some type of realistic emotion. Like "He said he would only cheat if i left for 5 days or longer, so I came back early so he WOULDN'T cheat, but he still did...time to beat the bitch!". I know realistic reactions or emotions are rare in BL stories but come the fuck on... Still amazingly lovely art tho, so there was at least something nice about this. Also, having a surgeon character like him is rare. Doctors are usually always introduced differently and have a different air about them. So that was kinda nice.

While I don't mind the typical, nonsensical yaoi logiks to move the plot along into a certain direction...this is kinda dumb af. I mean, trying to deny that you're an Omega is nice and all (it's useful to have your worklife go smoothly and not be discriminated against, etc.), but seemingly being in full on denial or just ignoring the facts (which simply cannot be ignored away, mind you) all while NOT taking medication that obviously is needed to make the lie work/not go up in flames is really fucking dumb. It's like me saying "I'm not a biological female!" while there's red niagara falls streaming out between my damn legs. Just...stop. It's like the kindergartener saying he didn't eat the cookies while he has crumbs around his face! X'D And the seme isn't better either (tho i suppose that's the authors fault obviously): "His personality is that of an alpha but I'm sure he smelled like an omega!" :v Like...dude, no shit?? Is this story set in a crippled power fantasy world in which any Omega is a submissive, spineless fucktoy? It does come across that way very slightly, but come on. What tf is with THAT logic? That's the same as saying every man is a Chad and every woman a Karen... Not very appealing, to say the least. I for one can't handle that kinda annoying logic so I'mma leave it at that. You lot have fun and enjoy it if you don't care about this stuff or can overlook it. I'm out and looking for something a bit more up my alley. Cheers!

First chapter wasn't interesting and that logic at the end of it was just plain idiotic. Art also seems to have changed from chapter 1 to chapter 10? Doesn't look as good, so that's another thing that makes me loose interest. Not gonna bother with this one.

Not the best, not the worst. But I have one issue right off the bat: The start is pretty shitty tbh. Leaving someone for not giving you enough attention (basically what it boils down to), even tho you don't have the decency to at least ask why the other party behaves the way they do is just shitty. I get the whole being suspicious thing, but it didn't come across in a 'I'm worried they might be cheating or whatever' sense the way it was portrayed here. Maybe the writing is just bad in that regard, but it's an overall really shitty type of thing to do. And while the author tried to make this more realistic by bringing up the 'are they really bad because I felt suspicious? Or is it me?', it wasn't portrayed well enough to make me feel comfortable with the MCs side of this arguement. He's dislikable af if that's his go-to logic in this situation. Besides...nobody is perfect and he clearly didn't care enough to ask personal things despite thinking/saying that they are dating. So they were basically just the fuck-buddy kind that goes out eating too. And that makes his 'no attention for me? let's break up then, lel' even worse then...

I really hoped (and expected) something better. The writing feels more like a rough draft with some parts partially fleshed out. It's way too rushed and hurries along without taking time to explain a situation in detail or let emotions or the mood of the situation be delivered to the reader. It moves from one happening to another without letting you take in what is happening and it has no focus on the emotions of the characters in general. Which is detrimental for stories like these. The characters are bland, the artwork os okay but not amazing enough to keep me interested just for the artwork alone. So, sadly, I'll pass on this one. I don't feel like any of these issues will be fixed. It's not uploaded as a promo, but the first two chapters instead so there's little to no hope these things will change. All in all this feels like a story written by a teenager that isn't aware of how this type of setting would work (hence the major logic issues aside from the pacing problems). I suppose it might be a decent first work for the author, but nothing I'll bother reading or recommending. Enjyo to whoever doesn't care about these issues, I'll look around for other stuff.

This is one of the shittiest copycat plots I've seen in ages. The author has many moments from the very start that make it feel like they can't follow their own story. Characters are way over the top toxic, the MC herself is a toxic bish that only seldom is likable and overall nobody can fucking think decently. It's not worth reading tbh. I tried, I really did, but it's only get worse as you progress. Which one should notice after the major fuck up in logic in chapter 28... Not even gonna bother re-checking for the end. Fully dropped due to all the faults which just make it a chore to read.