ReviewRaptor's manga / #SHITTY CHARACTER LOGIC(3)

The character logic of literally anyone in this is so bad that it makes me thing this was written by a literal teenager thinking they know how to write a cool, awesome and intrigue-filled plot. I just can't. It's so hilariously dumb that I'm both crying and laughing at the same time. X'D The art is okay but cannot carry. But the base storyline IS very interesting, which makes the shitty character logic even more of an eyesore. But then there is also the TONS of magical MAcGuyver/Mary Sue-ish moments that make the writing pretty bad. This could have been amazing with better writing, the core of the story is super nice. So I hope someone, someday makes a better copy-cat comic of this storyline. Would be nice. ╥﹏╥

I hope nobody who thinks like the MC ever gets isekai'd. Bitch, you wanna speed-run to your own execution THAT badly? XD Seriously, at least think for half a second if or if not your behavior would have bad consequences. We are talking medieval-type settings for these, usually, so getting your ass thrown in jail, executed or being called a witch that now needs to be off'd would happen faster than you could realize. DO. NOT. DO. THIS. I think the idea is nice, and I am certain I have seen something similar before, but her 'reckless abandon' is cranked to 11 and makes it really dumb. The art is decent but cannot carry. It lacks that certain factor to bring across emotions well in specific ways, as someone mentioned before me. And I think the factor is that there is not enough difference shown in the entire face from one emotion to another. And that makes it a bit bland overall. Pair that with the silly writing/dumb character logic and it's not really a good outcome. Good for first timers maybe, but not for seasoned readers who are looking for grand writing and impressive art to immerse themselves in. Decent but not good. Tho If you can view it as a comedy piece (which then again, the comedy is not nearly strong enough for), then I guess it can work as a light read regardless. I would say; give it a try. Maybe you can enjoy it as a read inbetween serious comics. :)

Can we talk about how obnoxiously written the MC is at times? The writing at the start was so great, but it's gone to shit now. Hopefully that'll change asap. Otherwise this was such a waste of time and great art. :/ RANT, clearly, so you have been warned. I reached chapter 40 now and OH MY FUCKING GOD, this is getting annoying. There was literally ONE panel inbetween the MC's thought of "maybe he DOES like me! so happy~ :3" - then he smiles at her and touches her cheek - MC goes "oh no, he's truly just doing this to hurt me.". Shut. The Fuck. UP. tf is wrong with you?? XD I do not think this is due to faulty translations, but one way or another this is the most stupid thing I have seen in writing in quite a while. At least PRETEND you are trying to give her reason to think like this instead of it just being random and clearly only being a thing so we can drag the story's obnoxious pretend-drama. #－.－) If this stuff happens again, I'll honestly drop this. Because writing flaws like this drive me up a wall, as you might be able to tell. I can forgive silly shoujo schoolgirl manga logic here and there, but at least stories of that sort try to give the change of thought REASON. Which this MC literally has zero of except for her dumb friend telling her and she immediately thinking that is reality. Which is probably the utmost obnoxious trait a person can exhibit: Someone told me, so it's the truth and I won't even bother looking at reality. 'Cause; drama be drama-ing. (=・ω・=) I already dislike her friend for being the way she is, but if the MC turns into the same type of annoyance, I'll honestly be disappointed. The baseplot is SO good and the writing good for 40 chapters, please do not make this turn into a cringey, toxic telenovela now. ╥﹏╥