The writing and the sudden scene skipping as well as the fact that there are MANY moments in which the author does not let emotions develope enough or settle in is very much hinting at this being a newcomer to comics.
The art too is sometimes randomly chibi-fied, which is supposed to indicate a lighter mood or funny moment but...that was NOT the appropriate choice at that moment.
It's not bad but not good either, but certainly a decent first attempt that can yield some experience for the creator on how to do things.
Now, the STORY, that aspect is incredibly interesting and I am inclined to go read the novel if there is one. Because I think it'll be a better read than the comic tbh. Both the MC and the ML are lovely in terms of personality and design and the overall plot is really intruiging BUT can be seen as rushed and boring at times because of the faults I first listed.
I like it and hope the author gathers more experience and creates better comics in their future too. Preferably stories like these, who's plot we have NOT seen a million times. X'D
It's a nice read, especially for less experienced readers, but even seasoned ones can enjoy it if they go into it with the newcomer aspect kept in mind. :)
The Admiral's Monster Wife