ReviewRaptor's manga / #RUSHED(15)

Isn't it kinda nonsensical, to say that 'black hair evul' and shun the 1st prince, when the beloved little dum-dum blondie boy has a DARKER HAIRED ATTENDANT than the shunned prince himself is?? If the colour makes a person evil, why tf let a dark-haired person tend to the beloved little prince? This makes no sense. X'D That guy's hair is closer to black than the princes', so what's with that logic? Please abide by your own rules, dear writers. It's VERY important. At least the 'eye-colour = evil' idea can be avoided by only having one person have intense eyes of a certain colour (let's be honest, it's either red or yellow), but ignoring your own rule in basically the same chapter is a tad bit silly. The other way around we could have had an excuse, since the prince's hair is more dark brown and the attendant is dark green-black. If they were switched we could make it make vague sense by saying: It's a different colour tho! Even if both are dark, the people differentiate! This just doesn't feel like the author remembered their own rules tbh. ╮(￣▽￣)╭

The baseplot is VERY nice but the execition is really lackluster and feels rushed AND random at times. As so often: Like a rought draft of different moments the author thought of and liked and somewhat tried to string into a story. It's a bit disappointing to say the least. Especially since I love these kinda plots (mafia boss X rando from the streets). Such a shame. I like the art and baseplot, really, but this is more of a page-flipper to jack off to than a cohesive, intruiging story that's well thought through. I'll read the ending when it's finished, just to see what kinda ending the author has planned for these two (the opening scene is making me think this'll be bs but oh well). Hopefully the future works of this person will be better. There IS potential after all.

I don't think the translation is to blame here but: This story feels rushed, lackluster, uses inappropriate times for comedy/chibi moments in a VERY unfitting way, the art is meh and the overall storyline is giving vibes of 'author had 5 minutes to come up with this'. I have read 8 chapters and no character is interesting, their emotions are shallow and badly portrayed, the story drags yet rushes at the same time and all in all there is just nothing that seems interesting. The random, almost magic-like sci-fi car bs really wasn't well thought out either. The author could have at least MENTIONED that this world is hard-progressed in terms of that stuff instead of it just being ONE single random thing plopping up. There is too much negative points to this comic that the only positive aspect that remains is likely: This is probably decent jerk-off material for some chapters. But I will NOT be bothered to read further to see if that holds true. The art is not interesting enough for me to care to see smut of it. Not recommended. This is likely only a story for people who care ZERO about good writing in every aspect. I really cannot explain it otherwise.