ReviewRaptor's manga / #Omegaverse(19)

Finally an Omegaverse in all the pile of shit that's cerainly good, realistic and adresses the mental and social issues at least a tiny bit. Art is pretty much the style from the series too, so that's also a major plus. WELL DONE, worth a read for sure~

While I don't mind the typical, nonsensical yaoi logiks to move the plot along into a certain direction...this is kinda dumb af. I mean, trying to deny that you're an Omega is nice and all (it's useful to have your worklife go smoothly and not be discriminated against, etc.), but seemingly being in full on denial or just ignoring the facts (which simply cannot be ignored away, mind you) all while NOT taking medication that obviously is needed to make the lie work/not go up in flames is really fucking dumb. It's like me saying "I'm not a biological female!" while there's red niagara falls streaming out between my damn legs. Just...stop. It's like the kindergartener saying he didn't eat the cookies while he has crumbs around his face! X'D And the seme isn't better either (tho i suppose that's the authors fault obviously): "His personality is that of an alpha but I'm sure he smelled like an omega!" :v Like...dude, no shit?? Is this story set in a crippled power fantasy world in which any Omega is a submissive, spineless fucktoy? It does come across that way very slightly, but come on. What tf is with THAT logic? That's the same as saying every man is a Chad and every woman a Karen... Not very appealing, to say the least. I for one can't handle that kinda annoying logic so I'mma leave it at that. You lot have fun and enjoy it if you don't care about this stuff or can overlook it. I'm out and looking for something a bit more up my alley. Cheers!

I know that Omegaverse stories have often the worst of ligic, but completely getting the meaning of Omega and Alpha wrong (as basic terms, not JUST the Omegaverse version, mind you) is just plain dumb. I get that the author wants to change the 'gender' dynamics with this gimmick of making the Omegas the 'better gender'...but this is just shoehorning on a large scale. The meanings of the terms are entirely altered, meaning the only thing that's varranting the change is the idea of 'alpha bad, omega good, so gotta change who's on top of food chain!'. I get the idea, but it doesn't work. The basic setup is too annoying to me, so I'll not bother with this, but apparently people view it as a good jerk off material, so there's that I suppose. XD Enjoy if you can, I'm dropping this based on logic issues.

The only struggle here is me reading this shit. wtf. The story is lackluster by picture perfect sefinition. Everything, from the start, feels little to not thought out and things happen more for convenience (especially character actions/interactions/reactions) and that's just the shittiest writing 'method' to use to create anything. And as early as chapter 8, things fall apart entirely. Things feel more like a roguh summary someone drew pictures for rather than a cohesive story. It's a struggle to read. And a bigger struggle to keep being interested. I'll skip through the pages and see what the omega deals with during pregnancy and how they reunite again (and yay for the 'surprise, you're actually an omega despite never showing such signs!' trope btw, that's idiotic af (and gotta LOVE people in omegaverse being too retarded to make actually useful tests to determine gender, but I digress)). But yeah, this is unreadable. Not even a little. It's just badly written and the art isn't saving it.