Review/Critique ahead, you have been warned.
It's honestly not the greatest writing.
The story has potential but given the author decided to to use it bothers me.
As LaNasha below in the comments mentioned: She's aware she can change stuff, yet doesn't care to do so in crucial and VERY IMPORTANT parts of the story.
I know this is a medieval-like setting and people back then didn't understand mental problems (because that is ultumately what the villain's problem is), but she's aware of what is happening and isn't doing jack. That's just bad writing no matter how you try to twist it. Unless you want to insert drama for dramas sake in a story YOU set up to have less drama and be about changing one's story and that of others alongside your own.
It's decent as a beginner thing, probably great for newer readers or kids that don't understand how dumb the writing is at times, but I for one have too much experience with good writing to read this. Which is a shame since I love these plots about people regressing and then finding a loving family dynamic waiting for them.
Shame this one went to waste.
It's not a horrible story, but not good either.
The art is decent but isn't extraordinary so that I would stay for that aspect alone.
I suggest checking it out for yourself, but seasoned readers will likely not find this great given the writing issues. It might not be a dealbreaker for all, but I for one don't like the nonsensical logic so I'll be moving to the next story.
I do hope the author creates more stories tho, amybe learns more about how to portray sadness and trauma tho (that father would NOT have smiled moments after finding his wife just because the child thought he was gonna off another kid).
There is plenty room for improvement so I have hopes for this as it's not too bad in many aspects. :)
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